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Old 06-11-08, 02:00 PM   #16
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Voted For: Intangible

vote: intangible..
more direct and more creative punches and def harder hitting...
more well structure verse and more complex even thou that wasnt really complex at all...

and i felt hes verse as i spit rather then d523...
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Old 06-23-08, 03:12 PM   #17
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Both some what generic verses.. no hard hitting punches
d523 wins though.. his tang line was iiight.. I liked his a bit more.. keep improoving and learning guys
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Old 06-25-08, 11:44 PM   #18
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Voted For: Intangible

Basically, I'm giving this go Intang. because he came harder. Alot harder. That;'s basically all there is to it. More consistent, more punches. Maybe D would have put up a better fight if he had as many lines as Intang had. That's about it.
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Old 06-25-08, 11:58 PM   #19
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Voted For: Intangible

Honestly your verse was superior. It was easier to read, better puches, better flow, better everything.
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