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Old 05-15-07, 03:30 PM   #16
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word thanks kid

lol but not another one that would make for like the 3rd one now
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Old 05-15-07, 10:21 PM   #17
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damn im gettting frustrated of this..... whose down to grab some other heads from another site and get em to show at least here man...no need for anything else like what i do i just get on here for CS and the league man
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Old 05-15-07, 10:21 PM   #18
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damn im gettting frustrated of this..... whose down to grab some other heads from another site and get em to show at least here man...no need for anything else like what i do i just get on here for CS and the league man
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Old 05-16-07, 10:10 AM   #19
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Yeah same here..

Go to ProjectRhyme... they dying and they got some good writers over there...
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Old 05-16-07, 10:10 AM   #20
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Yeah same here..

Go to ProjectRhyme... they dying and they got some good writers over there...
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Old 05-16-07, 05:20 PM   #21
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word...I am going to try and get Monk to join. He's good
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Old 05-16-07, 05:20 PM   #22
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Old 05-16-07, 06:15 PM   #23
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V/ Mr Write

I can explain it if you want.
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Old 05-16-07, 06:15 PM   #24
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Old 05-16-07, 06:59 PM   #25
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Please do. lol.....
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Old 05-16-07, 06:59 PM   #26
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Old 05-17-07, 02:41 AM   #27
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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Old 05-17-07, 02:41 AM   #28
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Mr Write's verse just had more depth, it was generally better. Better concept, I preferred his flow also. I felt absolutely no sympathy towards Lampejo's character, who came across as shallow. There was basically no development, not even a chance for me to feel sympathy due to poor execution. The simple flow didn't really help convey the story either.
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Old 05-17-07, 11:39 AM   #29
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Old 05-17-07, 11:39 AM   #30
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