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Old 06-19-08, 05:08 AM   #1
Yung MEDIkated
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Yung MEDIkated vs Got Soul? ©

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Old 06-19-08, 05:08 AM   #2
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Yung MEDIkated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-19-08 05:08 AM.
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Old 06-19-08, 06:22 AM   #3
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Fuck got soul/
Motherfucka I got milk/
I got heart...I got spirit/
The better question is do you got lyrics/
And I aint talking about T.V. Shows/
Your a spaced out myspace freak/
Fuck it your a U.F.O/
(Untalented Fucking Outsider)
How can you beat me when your losing yourself like altzcheimers/
I'm in the major league...your skills are minor/
Like under-age/
You couldn't beat me if you was the hulk under rage/
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Old 06-19-08, 04:32 PM   #4
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Old 06-19-08, 04:50 PM   #5
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ok, Im not even a text battler, but for humour sakes let me drop a quick key.

dropped my standards, never usually battle cocks who are lame
listen kid, I dont take shit like a blocked sewer drain
your punches dont hit, never leaving me with scars
Yungs no criminal, but when he drops, hes left behind in bars
I could kill this fag, even if I rhymed backwards
His battles allways produce L's like the X, Y axis
I seen kids come up with better shit than the rhymes you use
majority of the sites under 18, so whats your excuse??!
when you came to this site I was like, Oh no not another
then i relised why you act 10, cause your girl looks like your mother

heres a filler blah blah blah blah blah blah your wack
since when has it been cool to imulate men in black
medikated life, get a fucking load a this shit
theres a million ways to die, and you still went out like a bitch

Quickly key'd up

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Old 06-19-08, 04:55 PM   #6
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buahahahaha get a fucking load a your verse, your one wack mother fucker!!!
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Old 06-19-08, 05:13 PM   #7
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ysdat why? just why? lol...but at the same time medik actually suprised me with a relatively ok line about alzheimers, everything else was garbage though, sturcture needs a lot of work, as well as vocab and rhyming patterns. i think it would be in your best interests to listen to quality hip hop music, widen you listening and draw guidance from what you hear, ya follow

but yeh obviously ysdat won this one his structure was much better and he had some nice amusing punches, with a funny personal at the end, i have seen much better from ysdat before but this wasn't enough of a challenge to warrant going all out

so v/got soul
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Old 06-19-08, 07:53 PM   #8
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This verse goes to Soul for not being lame and putting slashes at the end of his lines. Also for having a good verse and stuff. But forreal. Soul took it, his verse consists of punches, whereas, Yung's didn't. If you DQ this I'll just come back on and alias and vote like 4 times.
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Old 06-20-08, 10:38 AM   #9
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what up soul???

you easily smashed on the yung'n with a simple key. good job cutty. keep up the good work bruh.

yung: better luck next time.


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Old 06-20-08, 12:57 PM   #10
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Fuck it your a U.F.O/
(Untalented Fucking Outsider)
How can you beat me when your losing yourself like altzcheimers/

lmao.

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medikated life, get a fucking load a this shit
theres a million ways to die, and you still went out like a bitch
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Old 06-20-08, 03:38 PM   #11
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^you have got to be fucking kidding me .
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Old 06-20-08, 03:46 PM   #12
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Fuck it your a U.F.O/
(Untalented Fucking Outsider)
How can you beat me when your losing yourself like altzcheimers/

lmao.

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medikated life, get a fucking load a this shit
theres a million ways to die, and you still went out like a bitch


^^^i respect your opinion of my boys verse lay....but wow. wow.

wow.


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Old 06-20-08, 05:36 PM   #13
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^^^BUMPIN' THIS BATTLE FOR VOTES!!!


the supe, c.s. life
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Old 06-22-08, 12:03 PM   #14
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the supe, c.s. life


^^^yeah. what he said.


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Old 06-22-08, 01:01 PM   #15
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Got soul wins by farrr... Medikated sorry but work on your flow and punches..'
Soul had some witty ones..
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