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Old 07-28-08, 01:25 PM   #1
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Lil Wayne (0) vs C.A.L.I. (0)

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Lil Wayne vs C.A.L.I.

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Old 07-28-08, 11:16 PM   #2
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lil wayne?someone really has that name?hahahahahahahahahahaha.check.
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Old 07-28-08, 11:46 PM   #3
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This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
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Old 07-29-08, 12:03 AM   #4
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.kcehc.ahahahahahahahahahahah?eman taht sah yllaer enoemos?enyaw lil
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Old 07-29-08, 02:21 AM   #5
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I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale

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Old 07-29-08, 02:45 AM   #6
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil' Wayne
I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
not a punch 0/10
And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
haha broom jokes dont get old 3/10
You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
seen herb smoke a billion times1/10
Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
lol 5/10..
I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
old but a goody 4/10

13/50

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Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
played 2/10
Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
yawn 2/10
Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
heh ok 5/10
Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
meh no 2/10
The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
uh no

1/10

12/50

Wayne Barely won
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Old 07-29-08, 10:06 AM   #7
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Lil Wayne

I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
Forced concept (hurt/heard)

And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
Broom/sweep wordplay is played

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
DOPE

Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
for & or-der really dont rhyme man... should have used something like for,-sir to rhyme with or-der to get the ryhming
schema together

I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
ehh????



C.A.L.I.
This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
lad-der & bat-tle do not rhyme

Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
Dope cuz Lil Wayne actually kissed Birdman on stage

Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
descent..good follow through on the punch

Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
Ehhh...


The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
the wording is very bad on this man...



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When it comes down to the wire, the punches that stood out in this battle are:

Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit


Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um

verses

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick


Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order




^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Vote - C.A.L.I. for having a slightly better worded diss / punch, but both yall need improvement on the rhyme schema
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Old 07-29-08, 01:00 PM   #8
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Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um

vs.

And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep


hmm...this was really close actually. They both only had one really decent bar, I think Waynes hit harder..

v/Wayne
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Old 07-29-08, 05:04 PM   #9
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Funny How The Two People Ive Been Beefin Wit Voted Aganist Me Quick As Hell
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Old 07-29-08, 05:07 PM   #10
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You haven beefed with me? you beefed with kirk,..stop chattin in here, I thought you were gonna beat him..you got to get away from that 05 style your using, your style using played stuff. No offense, I think he had a better worse.
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Old 07-29-08, 05:48 PM   #11
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I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
^Nah. Weak.

And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
^Nah. Weak.

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
^Nah. Weak.

Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
^Lmfaooooooo.

I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
^Nah.

This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
^Nah. Weak.

Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
^Played as FUCK, dude.

Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
^Nah. Weak.

Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
^Nah. Weak.

The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
^Ehhhh.



This was a shitty battle. Lil Wayne, I thought you were a vet. in disguise, but I guess you're not. Anyway, you both need to REALLY work on your punches. Both of your verses we're played as fuck concepts that have been used hundreds of times over the years, except for an exception of like one or two lines. Cali, you seriously need to upgrade your style. You've got '04 written all over you and shit has changed since then. Basically, every line in this battle was lame, but that order line from Wayne made me fuckin' laugh. He edged it out just a bit more.

V/Wayne.
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Old 07-29-08, 06:32 PM   #12
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Quote:
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Lil Wayne, I thought you were a vet. in disguise, but I guess you're not.
V/Wayne.

Lmao..... well, i havent battled text in like two years! I thought i'd try it out again. Im rusty as hell but as you can see i still got a Little left so im tryin to bring some back.
As far as hate voting goes... I read both votes and they seem explained to an extent. I mean Lay Fear was kind of short but him being a mod gives him a little lee-way to be short since he's got shit to do. If you want, im sure he'll elaborate more
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Old 07-29-08, 06:39 PM   #13
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C.A.L.I
This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
Weak and played.
Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
Weak.
Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
Not feeling it, not really a punch.
Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
Nah.
The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
Alias punches are played too.

Vs.

Lil' Wayne
I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
Weak as fuck.
And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
Not bad.
You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
Nope.
Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
Meh.
I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
Weak.

Well, this battle had two bars in it that I might consider punches and Lil' Wayne dropped them both so..

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Old 07-29-08, 07:06 PM   #14
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CALI
This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
Wak
Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
played
Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
no wit no glory
Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
mah, better attempt but still wak
The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
your wording is terrible... I see the played concept but the wording messed it up for you

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Wayne Head
I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
almost but forced to shit
And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
better but I dont think determinedly is word lol
You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
word play is there but the wording is killing you, concept is also weak
Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
doesn't really rhyme, wording problem but a good line, Ive seen it better
I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
played fat jokes hmmmm, like no one has ever heard of them before.

this battle was weak, Cali didn't come with anything witty at all and barely made any attempt at wit, Lil Wayne made more of an attempt in a way but he obviously bit a fat joke. the stand for nothing could have been worded waaaaayyyy better aswell but he still put more effort sooo

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Old 07-29-08, 08:34 PM   #15
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C.A.L.I.

No good punches.

Lil Wayne

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order

Those were the only decent punches in this battle. The order line was sick as shit, that line won this for you on it's own. C.A.L.I. for all the shit talk you came REALLY weak, in fact your opener didn't even rhyme. Step it up next week with better concepts, wordplay and just about everything. Same with you Wayne, if all your bars are good as those two then you'll be a force to reckon with. Overall weak battle and I hope the two of you elevate for the league's sake.

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