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Old 01-07-09, 02:26 AM   #16
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Neither one of you did extremely good.

But I'll give it Matters for the Harry Houdini/Appendix line. I actually looked it up to see if you were making a false personal, but it wasn't. Houdini did die from getting punched in the stomach. Nice.

Houdini, I liked the Willis/Armageddon line and the illest-kid/willis-did multi was nice. But next time try to get some personals in you verse.

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Old 01-07-09, 02:26 AM   #17
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Voted For: King Mathers

Neither one of you did extremely good.

But I'll give it Matters for the Harry Houdini/Appendix line. I actually looked it up to see if you were making a false personal, but it wasn't. Houdini did die from getting punched in the stomach. Nice.

Houdini, I liked the Willis/Armageddon line and the illest-kid/willis-did multi was nice. But next time try to get some personals in you verse.

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Correction... Vote=Mathers
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Old 01-07-09, 02:53 PM   #18
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in my battle i misspelt a word, you knew what i meant but you took a shot that wasn't fair
nigga you far from perfect, broke ass faggot i bet your momma still cuts your hair
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this wasn't a good line at all because it had no wordplay and probably isn't true, but it made me laugh a little. oh and dont put spaces between your bars kid, it looks real newbish
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battleing has nothing to do with ILLEST-KID WILLIS- DID, type shit, showing that u are rhyming words is retarded. its about creativity and punchlines with wordplay that make fun of your opponet. u have to find out something true about his name and then find a way to flip it using wordplay so it hits.
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like wit that houdini line wit the appendix bursting. u got that to work with now thing of a way to use a metaphor with the punch like.
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i'll kill u like the real houdini wit a punch to the back.. u cant defend it
i aint talkin candy but imma make this wanna be start burst out his appendix
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sumin like that. the lead in explains the punch that way u dont have to later, cuz explaining punches is wack.
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ya'll need to go read the tutorials and good battles from the past on this site
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Old 01-07-09, 06:24 PM   #19
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Old 01-08-09, 11:06 AM   #20
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haha This place is deas. I been gone a week. D MY BATTLES AINT CLOSED. I been here 4 years and never thought I'd say this. FUCK RV, I have a more active site. Im no longer here. SO..... I will forfeit all, Not by out skill but by lack of REAL MCS here. Just dick rides.....BYE FAGGOTS
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Old 01-18-09, 06:26 PM   #21
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lol, at King Mathers winning this. Checking polls.
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Old 02-02-09, 09:40 AM   #22
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