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I'll Make Your Verse 'Crack-Up' ~ Like Im 'Spittin-Jokes'...
Cause Silence Is 'Going Down' Like He 'Hit-The-Slopes'//
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I Didnt 'Feel' Ya 'Flow' ~ I'm Too-Numb-From-Laughin...
It Was More Disasterous Then Two-Tsunami's-Clashin//
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Your Square ~ Lets Go A-Round And Lemme Beat-Ya-Block...
The Only Time Silence Spits Hard Is After He Eats-A-Rock//
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Amend'll 'Quote Ya Verse' ~ So You Cant 'Erase-The-Past'...
It Never Really 'Matter'ed ~ Cause Your A 'Waste-Of-Mass'//
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AMEND's Your 'Main Course' ~ Im Never Put-'A-Side'...
And Your Plan For De'feet' Felt Like A 'Foot-Massage'//

*everybody in the 3-1-3... throw ya hands up and bounce wit me*



i shoulda let my little sister battle you, she plays with fake-bitches
you can say "fuck-the-Bull", since ya game is gayer than Pippen's
cage you in prison, spit on you like a shower and dare you to drop
nigga i noticed you've been floored so much, i'd wax you wit mops
faggot, you're only fifteen, how you gonna rip me, you bitch teen
claim the college scene, but ya scholarship's worth only six weeks
homo nigga, don't you know AMEND means to change-that-name?
shit, weak-ass-nigga gets less curls than his handicapped brain
but fuck it dun, you're funny as hell, you should go blow-the-devil
mc's knocked-you-off-balance.. the only times you've rose-a-level

Both came aight... my vote goes to Silence... his verse had wittier punches.... Amends was aight, except for the last line.... that didnt even really rhyme.... and Amend dont say i voted for him just because of our battle.... this guy voted for you in our battle... i am being honest

Vote: Silence

I just like this style so much... it's not filler ridden... and the
punches are clear...

Put it this way... just like RM or RnR... it's whoever comes the illest
with the punches... not long ass multis and pointless metaphors.
I can't understand how some cats here don't respect RnR and RM
verses... I like em.

(I've been on these sites alot... so I'm alittle open right now...
don't mind me)

This kids on here haven't gotten on that RNR & RM level yet... mostly new rappers come to this site... This site was very iLL at one time..

Truth.

That's why I had to specifically state "RnR"... But I did these
verses for experimental purposes... guess it'll catch on... maybe.

1st I Wanna Say That U Had An Aiight Verse, Not As iLL As U Make It To Be, lol......
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Comes The Illest?, How Arent Metaphors Or Multi's Included In That?, U Can Punch All Day But Shit U Act Like Originality Or Flow Doesnt Take Part Somewhere, People Have Different Opinions And U Cant Change It, So Exactly "U Cant Understand Em", But U Had More Then Enough FILLERS In That^ Verse, Dont Make Me Point Em Out.....
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i shoulda let my little sister battle you, she plays with fake-bitches
you can say "fuck-the-Bull", since ya game is gayer than Pippen's
(1st was pretty decent, 2nd was ????? "fuck-the-Bull", <~I Didnt Get It)
cage you in prison, spit on you like a shower and dare you to drop
nigga i noticed you've been floored so much, i'd wax you wit mops
(Now How Many Times Have I Seen This CONCEPT?)
faggot, you're only fifteen, how you gonna rip me, you bitch teen
claim the college scene, but ya scholarship's worth only six weeks
(1st Was Irrelovent And Non-Personal, 2nd Didnt Make Sense)
homo nigga, don't you know AMEND means to change-that-name?
shit, weak-ass-nigga gets less curls than his handicapped brain
(1st Was Close To Personal, And 2nd Was Again Pointless I Mean Ok I Get That Brains Have Curls But Whats It Mean?)
but fuck it dun, you're funny as hell, you should go blow-the-devil
mc's knocked-you-off-balance.. the only times you've rose-a-level
(1st Was A What? A Comparison of Some Sort, 2nd Was Simplistic)
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So Why U Keep Talkin About RnR And RM, Thats Why I Dont Like Them Sites Cause U Cant Have An Opinion Or Any Kind Of Difference With The Way U Write, Spit, Or Battle......If I Misunderstood One Of Your Punches Then Please Enlighten Me On Its Maybe Subliminal Meaning Or Its "So Deep" Meaning That Only U Understand It, Or Maybe People U Already Explained It To............
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I Have No Beef With U And I Dont Care If I Lose, But Your Attitude Toward Shit Is Aggravating Cause You Act One Minded And Un-Open To New, Old, Different Or Anything That Doesnt Try To Act Like Yours, Type Of Rap.........1

silence tge

silence takes the W

wtf is tge????
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