yo this is my first poem..
would help if u guys tell me what ya think


So what up?, think you’re cool? Think I suck?
This is straight from the heart
Don’t really know were to start
Sick of mutherfuckers discriminating
Can’t walk on the streets without getting some hating
Its frustrating,,, my patience is fading
Someday my head will explode, Overdosis on Tylenol.
Cant walk on da streetz without my gun…”load”
Its time to see the other side of the coin
Hope with this I can make my point
I’ve been humiliated, badly rated, discriminated
I cant believe how I’ve manage to made it.
And all for not being white or black
For being latin, you say, nothing but crap
Well fuck all who think like that
Like u I love to rap
But for doing it I have to carry a huge burden on my back
That shit makes a sound in ma soul…and that sound is : “crack”
Half white – half black… shit I’m fucked
Sadly the world’s divided in two
And we don’t belong to either group
Like for being born I’ve become a sinner
Mom works all day long but her wallet keeps getting thinner
Shit I’m just a beginner
But what I say I feel, what I say I get out
What I get out makes me cleaner
Damn it’s the 21rst century..
How can there still be haters? It’s a fucking mystery
Not so often a trip a day
But when I do, your bullshit comments… take that feeling away..
Scared that someday I might be carried away
Do some crazy shit and with an AK make you all pay..
But I don’t wanna fight
Nor make ya feel untight
But fuck I had to say it
And it had to be tonight


peace,
panamARed