thanks din,much appreiciated..

Aterack i send u a message in ur Pm.........go check it out

Ooooooooh....

I Would Type Out One Of My Long As Fuck Replies Quoting This And That, Which I Only Normally Do To DaGyrlRemarqabL These Days....But They're All Long Winded And Shit And Don't Do My Wrists Much Good..

I Will Say That This Piece Was Very Nice And Complex To My Standards, Like Sand Said The Internal Rhyming Was Focking Ill..

Keep Up The Writing Bro And The Good Crit In Replying To Other Open Mics, You Do That Pretty Well..LoL

thanks for the replies,done alright for a wuick drop....maybe my topic league pice will do jsut as good...lmao...wagwan?

yo Ate...nice imagery...nice vocab...nice story line...tha plot thickens...down for whatever...peace...uppin...sorry i've been away for awile...

^^hes back...look hes back.... ....now where did narcysickness get to?...lol..salam alaikom

This was hot spittin no ? about it, only thing in the lengthy commentary but I understant you wanted to bring forth a setting a mood to the piece. Tight imagry with words, Good shit.

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i'm back dunny...like isaid before this piece is tight like alter boys before they sit on the lap of a priest namsayin...hell yah man if you on ever pm me i gotta send youa shit load of tracks and beats...wait till you hear the new Narcicyst&Loe Pesci (Patrick BateMEN) tracks its off the meat rack like diseased beef namsayin...wahid

^^i open my mouth ,and he returns...i am powerful...no i just have impecible timing...go on the chat thingo dun,the msn whatever its called...good to see you,well you get what i mean.

incredible...this peice is how old now?...and its still going..its like the kiss revival,fuckers jsut wont die...


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