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Old 05-13-03, 07:25 PM   #1
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Don't be all up in mines

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Always in my Kool-aid and neva knowin that flava
I wouldn't tell you my bizzness not Now and not Later
All up in mines you need to find ya own
Sittin wonderin why things aint right at home
It's all good in my hood...What about yours?
Whay you lookin like that... You aint pleasin ya boy?
Be tryna give advice but neva take tha ish
What you need to do is stay off my dick!
Find ya own damn life and stay out mine
Cause as far as eyes can see Baby it's jus fine
Nosey ass female wanna know every detail
Tryna put me in yours so you can know mine
Talkin to you is a waste o my time
Aint got nothin betta to do then meddle in my stuff
But when I get in yo face you wanna fuss! (hell naw!)
Jus mind ya own
Don't worry about me
I'm still young!
I gots plenty of time you see?
I'm a make mistakes and have good and bad times
But six words for you...

DON"T BE ALL UP IN MINES!
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Old 05-13-03, 09:18 PM   #2
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This was pretty good. I feel the same damn way about some people. Why they gotta worry about my stuff when they got problems of their own?? Anyways, nice post.
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Old 05-14-03, 06:07 PM   #3
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.....hmm....no comment...no names... * grinnin *
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Old 05-14-03, 06:32 PM   #4
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Legendary thank you

D shut up you don't know who I'm talkin bout! It might be you...
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Old 05-15-03, 12:00 AM   #5
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Props,
i liked dis .. rhymed & flowed well,

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Old 05-15-03, 01:32 PM   #6
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thanks
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Old 05-16-03, 09:10 PM   #7
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Chick please
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Old 05-19-03, 01:11 PM   #8
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Heffa don't start nothin wont be nothin
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Old 05-19-03, 04:32 PM   #9
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I checked out your piece and i think you are showing alot of meaning but you tend to seek the black hole of simplicity. Many of your rhymes tend to be very typical. Try to work on a more abstract measure and i think you'll find some promising results in the diversity of your works to come.

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Old 05-19-03, 07:13 PM   #10
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Thank You deacon that was very insightful.
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