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Old 05-26-03, 06:19 PM   #1
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10 lines min. 20 max
due: Thursday (get intouch with me if that wont work for your schedule. we will work it out. Also if you have problems with topics reach me.

Topic: Gravestones
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Old 05-26-03, 09:08 PM   #2
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-hahaha-
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Old 05-27-03, 12:51 AM   #3
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Wow, why doesn't someone bend me over backwards and stick a dildo in my ass.
Let me guess, I'm the bottom seed, and he's the top.

*sigh*I hate my life *sigh*





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Old 05-27-03, 05:31 PM   #4
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Wow, why doesn't someone bend me over backwards and stick a dildo in my ass.
Let me guess, I'm the bottom seed, and he's the top.

*sigh*I hate my life *sigh*





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LOL..

Gravestones....damn nice topic...ill watch this one for sure....

who's gonna win??? I have no idea hehehe...


just wanna say good luck!
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Old 05-27-03, 10:51 PM   #5
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Yo, if you don't mind, I won't be able to post until Friday, I got a concert at my school both tomarrow and Thursday night, and I don't wanna drop a weak keystyle, tiK, I could use this one
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Old 05-27-03, 11:42 PM   #6
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sounds good. Friday is set for Mad Man phrantik is still for thursday--

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Old 05-27-03, 11:54 PM   #7
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haha my verse is done and dope.
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Old 05-28-03, 12:17 AM   #8
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phrantik i have high expectations for what im about to see.

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Old 05-29-03, 05:18 AM   #9
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goodluck to both of you i am watching this one
 
Old 05-29-03, 09:04 PM   #10
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Gravestones... A tribute to the forgotten

A thousand heads stand erect in the dirt
Symbolizing the tortured souls I had hurt
There voices only speak in monotonous tone
And their faces fall apart like eroding stone
Each head a memory, expression of deeds
The fruit that has grown from my evil seeds
Tributes of Flowers get laid beneath the heads
To praise, give thanks to all those dead
But I bring rotten dead roses that wilt
To let them remember it’s them I had killed
Their blood I had spilled, their lives I had stole
And it was me that left them dead in a hole
Forgotten by family shut out by their friends
It was I who brought existence to ends
Years of denial have left corpses gone rotten
And gravesotones to pay tribute to the forgotten
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Old 05-29-03, 09:21 PM   #11
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Wow, why doesn't someone bend me over backwards and stick a dildo in my ass.


keep this to your self mad man

thats way too much material against you

i hope noone else reads that and then
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Gravestones... A tribute to the forgotten

A thousand heads stand erect in the dirt
Symbolizing the tortured souls I had hurt
There voices only speak in monotonous tone
And their faces fall apart like eroding stone
Each head a memory, expression of deeds
The fruit that has grown from my evil seeds
Tributes of Flowers get laid beneath the heads
To praise, give thanks to all those dead
But I bring rotten dead roses that wilt
To let them remember it’s them I had killed
Their blood I had spilled, their lives I had stole
And it was me that left them dead in a hole
Forgotten by family shut out by their friends
It was I who brought existence to ends
Years of denial have left corpses gone rotten
And gravesotones to pay tribute to the forgotten



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Old 05-29-03, 09:23 PM   #13
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dope verse

mad, your up
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Old 05-30-03, 01:46 AM   #14
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mad come on man better see something when i wake up---

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Old 05-30-03, 02:37 PM   #15
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I walk through the Graveyard with flowers in my hand
It feels like the millionth time I've walked through this land
And the trek that I make is one full of sorrow
Everytime I make it, I wish there was no tomarrow
And then I arrive at that lonely grave
The name reads: Jill Emma Redave
Born 1986 Died 2003
"The loveliest girl that ever would be."
See her parents truly loved her with all of their heart
But I loved her more that with her I still can't part
See I can still recall my desire
And every revery I have is on fire
See everytime we met, in my heart there was a burning
Because every night we spent together was the heat of yearning
And I can't take not ever seeing her again
And I pulled out what would let me see her in heaven
And on her cross, I boar Christ's position in which he died
Blood flowed from my head from where I lied
This loss was something that I couldn't get over on my own
And next to her I got my own Gravestone...
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