Your SOngs are so damn long but they are fu cking amazing dude, gd how u come up with that shit u fag, holla

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Ill piece man , , but next time dont type ur verses in paragraph form , , your Lyrics were Nice , i Liked tha way u put it 2gether , but next time dont type it in paragraph form

aight thanx

i agree wit wat bash siad if u wrote em out like every one else did it wouldve been betta but everything else was nice i liked u got 7/10 in my book

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this was nice, but i didnt like the way you wrote it out it made it hard to pick up the flow, are you going to turn this into audio? if you do PM me the link.

shit was real, deep emotion really showed,nice vocab,nice word play, alil edgy at first but evened up all in all nice drop kid, keep postin this ill shit.peace god.

damn thats all i got 2 say bout this shit man sometimes when people flow its like 3d they come right at ya

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nyce post playboy, nice job for tha first time, good story.......as always things like wordplay and rhyme scheme could have been betta, but practice helps that ish out, good luck, peace, 1 luv

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