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Old 06-16-03, 11:27 PM   #1
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~Sick Muthafucka~...

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feedback...
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Old 06-16-03, 11:34 PM   #2
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Old 06-17-03, 05:59 PM   #3
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ok....?
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Old 06-17-03, 10:36 PM   #4
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OH CHRIST.
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Old 06-18-03, 09:16 AM   #5
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u like to follow me dont u ?
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Old 06-18-03, 05:48 PM   #6
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^^ uppin
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Old 06-18-03, 05:53 PM   #7
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dats was OK
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Old 06-18-03, 07:36 PM   #8
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I thought it was straight...Tight Work Kid!!!
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Old 06-18-03, 08:16 PM   #9
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iight thanx for the feedback...

keelo i told u, ur a hater

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Old 06-19-03, 06:06 PM   #10
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^^^^^^^^^^ uupppiiinnn
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Old 06-21-03, 12:24 AM   #11
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need some feedback plz...
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Old 06-21-03, 02:24 AM   #12
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heard this beat before, my boy rhymed to this


humm, on the real dawg, im not really feeling this, you aint got no flow, lyrics is weak, delivery is aright, but i dono, aint really laugh to any of the shit u said,kinda gay,but whatever yo this just my opinion, but you should defenitly work on a flow and stronger lyrics, with dope punchlines and shit... anyways yo keep on spittin
peace
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Old 06-21-03, 08:04 PM   #13
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ok... uh.. wut do u mean when u say "delivery"... and how do i improve on my flow ?
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Old 06-22-03, 06:19 PM   #14
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^^uppin
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