damn this shit was good
i enjoyed it through the whole thing
never seen anybody write that much though
couldnt belive it

You're The Dopest Of Dope In Dopeland...

This Peice Was Dope..

-Sureal

thats alot of wrting goin on......daaaaaaaamn.....but even though it took 3 years to read it was still nice as fuck. nice piece

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WoW !!! That was pretty intense. Great imagery that provoked powerful feeling at least for me. Sounds like you'll move on though , as life and love always do. Glad I took the time to read your peice.

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Crazy E

great

^ You are one of the dumbest people to stumble upon RB.com. All you did was say 'great' as Masta D and I banned you for it. Thinking you'd learn your lesson, I didn't IP ban you so you could have another chance. What do you do? Make another name and do the same shit. You are a moron and are now IP Banned.

Great.

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^^ lol... this was a real nice piece gurl... you show a lot of talent... good thing im workin with ya then huh lol... everybody already broke it down soo theres nada left for me to do hehe... stay up gurlie...

-lady

that shit was good u did pretty good

i enjoyed it from start to finish i hope keep doin this

cause u got talent

YAY!.......more replies...*clapping hands* "hercules! HErcules!"

*is retarded*

hmmm...more ppl to thank again....*excited*

here you go...

Enoch a.k.a. Legendary..i really appreciate that good feedback...

The End...*glares* stop freeposting on my thread...LOL..jp

Understatement...very well thank you Pat...wow one of the best writers ive seen on here liked my long ass poem...LOL..glad u liked it

J.K.O....i think u really really liked my poem..its obvious cuz u replied to it twice.....hehe...and thanks a lot man!

Sureal..whats with u dope that aint no dope would really doper the dopest dope ever?? ahhhhhh.....hehehe im not dope...U IS!...but anyways...thanks for that 'dope' reply!

Hyper Shadow..."great." "nice shit yo!" *shakes head*...Thanks The End!!!

Lady Sexstacy...hey ShA!....thanks gurl...oh and yeah...im gonna email bout all the poems u sent me..ill see what i can do...thanks once again!

......my poetry successfully shared... <---dope!

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yo how u write wot i woz thinkin? jus bout every line rite der reach me in sum way, u a good writter! but only one bit confused me tha bit bout "11 cds" eggsplain?? keep up ur writtin ur good at it. peace
~roX~

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What's that all about? Legendary's usually okay here. Nothing to be ashamed of. Gives good replies n all that.

*scratches head*...

Oh well, i can see the reasons...but maybe someone would highlight which one of them it is...(!)...

I could've swore i replied to this before.

I guess i must've read it but was in too much of a rush to reply to it or something.



So here it is, Shizzy...


Written damn well. You seemed to cruise through the piece word by word...it kept me reading all the way through. You really got into the 'situation' and gave us a brief but important exploration into it. Imagery was subtle yet well done.

Though i felt the rhyme scene and how it was built up too was at times rigid. And made the flow slightly akward. that didn't matter much at all.

Also the lenght of the lines struck me as being too long at first sight. But the way it was written, as i read through it...it not only ceased to bother me..but i saw it becoming part of the piece. Part of how the piece was meant to be. You know, the 'art' of the piece in a way. Done like that on purpose for artistic reasons...

..anyway, that's enough said from me. I enjoyed this, you seem comfortable with a 'pen' (or keyboard) judging from this piece alone...

...resp...

Make up your mind. If I didn't freepost than that fool wouldn't have been banned. *sigh* Women.


Varentao.. I do an IP check with almost ever newbie I see to check and see if they are someone else under a different alias. I did a check on Enoch and that's how I saw that it was Legendary. Standard protocol my friend.

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i don't know what that means brandon...lol......anywayz.....hows
it going Jen...ha ha ha......but seriously.....i really don't read alot
of poems and shit....but someone told me to peep this....and i'm
glad i did.....ur vocab was on point......ur feelings were deep....i
can tell u kinda poured ur heart into this.....ur probably layed in
bed.....tears coming down your eyes....while writing this piece....i
wouldn't doubt if u did.....cuz like i said....it was deep.....good job
Jen.....and i'm glad to see your poems are better than your jokes..
lol......i'll holla...........peace

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