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Old 09-29-03, 05:44 AM   #1
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Chritt Rapbattles Mod Diss!!

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I REPLIED TO NONEEDZ THREAD!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/sagelyricistmusic.htm

Textcees!
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Old 09-29-03, 06:03 AM   #2
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huh
chrit is wak
ahahahhahhahahhahaha
battle him then kid
u prlly his alies are sum shit
or sum mod or sumthin
funy tho
u shud merk him an get ya first win
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Old 09-29-03, 06:14 AM   #3
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Lmmfao
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Old 09-29-03, 05:57 PM   #4
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Damn. Shit was pretty good. Probably one of the best tracks I've heard from an internet head. Quality was nice and your flow was on point 95% of the time. I only really noticed it fallin off once. You went off beat once or twice, too, but it's straight. Good shit. The caps lock and assault charge thing were nice. Haha. Stay up, kid.
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Old 09-29-03, 06:21 PM   #6
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Old 09-29-03, 06:29 PM   #7
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Quote:
Originally posted by Y.G.Swoop
^sounds like...you like dick....


Sounds like...eThug...
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Old 09-29-03, 07:10 PM   #8
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uhhh...this shit was coo...but ya flow was off, more than once...ya delivery was a little off...lyrics were nice, but the verse structure was kinda weak...coo for a little diss...nothin too special...i liked the caps lock line...that once probably hit the best...good shit....


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Old 09-29-03, 07:36 PM   #9
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this was funny in places, and the beat is ill!

*woosh*
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Old 09-29-03, 07:39 PM   #10
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You're Scheme Is Horrible Lmao, Half Of
You're Lines Don't Even Rhyme . You're
Flow Is Crooked, You're Emotion & Delivery
Was About The Only thing Good .
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Old 09-30-03, 12:19 AM   #12
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haha liked the punches about him being a text cee,
u had good flow, nice beat, good delivery,
bah u should work on your breathing a lil bit,
but other then that........bhahahaahaahaha funny as fuck punchlines man......................
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Old 09-30-03, 02:57 AM   #13
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lmfao . . . chrit you know you my homie . . .


. . . but you just got rode on like . . .









WHOA!
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Old 09-30-03, 10:54 AM   #14
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lmao

okay

The only reason my flow is off or I fall off beat at all is because I wrote the diss with no beat, then tried to find a beat to match. Im sorry but I dont care enough about internet beef to spend time on it, I got blazed and bored so I decided to spit this over a beat. If you think I have no flow you can look at the rest of the tracks on my page. (Look at "Sage Verses" probably best example of my variety of styles) I was also stoned beyond belief and my throat was KICKED. You should see the buddah I got right now wooo.. but anyways that affected my breath control because it hurt me to inhale. Lol.

lol.. this is the most feedback I've ever gotten and its from dissing some wack homosexual mod. Ah well this shit was fun. Jokes.

peace

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Old 09-30-03, 05:08 PM   #15
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YOU SUCK LEARNTO RAP
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