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Old 10-28-03, 04:09 PM   #16
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Stop riding each other's dicks up in here!

LOL!

Very nice piece, LM...

Deep, meaningful and emotional.

A very good callout for peace with moms.

You should let her read it.

I can relate, but I'm older and colder...

My relationship with my mom fell apart, what, 20 years ago?

And we haven't spoken since.

Like I said, older and colder, I have no regrets.

She was an insane bitch, but you seem ta have something worth saving...so do it.

Props to ya.

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Old 10-28-03, 04:25 PM   #17
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Thanks man. Sorry to hear bout you and your mom....even if you have no regrets
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Old 10-28-03, 05:11 PM   #18
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Old 10-29-03, 01:15 AM   #19
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i love this piece....... LM, how old are you?

u got some talent for this.... your relationship with ur mother is worth something - dont give it up
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Old 10-29-03, 04:35 AM   #20
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I'm 16.
My and my mom are speakin now....sort of
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Old 10-29-03, 05:33 AM   #21
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yo dawg that shit was ill, i aint really relatin to it, cuz me and my moms r like aquantices more than family, ever since ma dad's been in lockdown, but yo peep my battles
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Old 10-29-03, 08:57 AM   #22
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Old 10-29-03, 02:02 PM   #23
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Old 10-29-03, 04:26 PM   #24
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Old 10-29-03, 09:39 PM   #25
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yo LM i really liked this piece. i (and too damn many others) can completely feel for ya; i just found out my mom's a lyin bitch, and i now loath her.... oh well, life goes on.
we like this piece cuz we can relate (and tha rhyme scheme's tight too), don't we, alex? Yes, we do, johnny.

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Old 10-29-03, 10:22 PM   #26
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Quote:
Originally posted by LM
This is just a little keystyle. It's about whats goin on in my life right now.


Mom why do we gotta be this way....fightin everyday/
Last night was the worst....we aint even spoke today/
Is there anythin I can say to make it better....to stop the pain/
I hate the fact that when somebody mentions my name you drop your head in shame/
All I got without you is my love for the rap game....thats not enough/
Coz I love you so much....but you've hurt me so I've gotta stand tough/
I feel locked in a world of hate....like I'm handcuffed/
I can't break free....All I wanna do is hear you say I love you Lee/
Mom It's me....your son....please dont abandon me/
One day you'll see I can make you proud/
I'm gonna be somebody one day then you can shout my name out loud/
You can listen to the sound of my voice on a microphone/
Soon we'll forget all the nightmares of livin in a broken home/
I cant wait til that day coz right now I feel lonely and alone/
Mom please call me on me cell phone/
We patch things up in a hurry/
I'll make the first move....mom I'm sorry/.


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Lee - my name
The rest is self explainitory
ay cozz! nice drop .. i was feelin this to the heart .. my momz and i is kinda like this cozzo .. except we just fuckin hate each other .. and i dont mean to sound like no Eminem .. but its facts .. i was feelin this cozz .. keep droppin .. get at me!
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Old 10-29-03, 10:28 PM   #27
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Damn, this was a deep peice son. I could tell that this was from the heart. I feel you tho son, my moms and me fight all the time it seems lately and your post really hits home for me. Big upz to you and keep your head up son, 1
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Old 10-30-03, 11:02 AM   #28
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Yo thanks for the feedback everybody
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Old 10-30-03, 02:43 PM   #29
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Ok uppin for freedback once again......I hope there's no limit on how many times you can up for feedback
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Old 10-30-03, 05:43 PM   #30
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this is a very nice drop..........it is very deep..................u had some nice lines wit good wordplay........................................

if this is true i hope u patch things up with your mom


good drop

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