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10-30-03, 06:49 PM
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i have to agree with what most people are saying this made for a good read, you showed some nice vocab.......no point in writin out again whats been said.......keep it up....
can you hit this plz its gettin slept on.... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88249 |
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10-30-03, 09:07 PM
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if this is your first open mic then damn... keep up that good shit man.
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10-31-03, 05:27 AM
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Thanks for the comments everybody....keep them comin and check out my second ever open mic peice...It's called 'This is my life'.
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10-31-03, 10:24 AM
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10-31-03, 11:45 AM
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10-31-03, 01:18 PM
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10-31-03, 01:23 PM
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Yo LM this is startin to seem funny.... first the almost 8-mile, then I'm sorry Momma too?! It's alright man..... I guess....(smirk)
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10-31-03, 01:38 PM
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I never thought bout that either. I wrote this the mornin after me and my mom had an arguement. It was a bad one too. I wasnt thinkin of Cleanin out my closet at all. But once again your right. See what you can think of for my one called 'This is my life'. |
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10-31-03, 03:11 PM
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11-01-03, 04:11 AM
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11-01-03, 05:37 AM
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yea this was a real deep peice...flow was good...vocab was good also...content was real good and i really felt the emotion put into this peice...real nice drop..hope you work that shit out with you and your moms...keep dropping son...
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11-01-03, 06:57 AM
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this wasnt anything like cleanin out my closet..... LM actually wants to save his relationship with his mom but em was basically saying "i never meant to hurt you, but i didnt deserve this: fuck you"... big difference
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11-01-03, 09:03 AM
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11-01-03, 11:47 AM
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11-01-03, 04:47 PM
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