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08-10-04, 09:59 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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"Never Ever"
IP: D135 D6AF
"Never let love go" We never intended it to intentionally b like This Neva was our good times supposed 2 be Missed Never am i supposed 2 forget my love with You Never was i supposed 2 forget what we been Thru Never will i ever forget you~Never lose that Feeling Never did i realize that you are the key i was Needing Never will i forget the sweet tune of ya heart Beats Never will i let the sound of u leave my Memory's Never without you can i ever imagine livin with Out Never will your name ever cease from my Mouth Never will i forget the Impact that Sarah Has Never will i let Sarah Chamma leave my Vocab Never will i ignore it when your name is Mentioned Never again from you i will Hide away my Intensions Never will i let the Strength of our fate get took Away Never will i be hungry again because you fill my Plate Never will i have 2 exploit and fool with any more Women Never will i deny again that you are my Motive for Livin Never will i have to experience any more one night Stands Never will I have to wakeup wondering if im in your Plans Never will we get in conflicts over silly shit i didnt mean 2 Never will i let Anything over bear us we can make it Thru Never will i pressure you and force you towards any Abortion's Never will i Denie you of the love you need and crave in Portions Never will we Fuck but Make Sweet Love until the sun rises Up Never again will i tell you that were done and out time is finally Up Never will i deny that i want Children never will my feelins be Sheilded Never before have i said U are my world and I love you and actually Meant It Never will i stop our Growth and never will your love for me turn Cold Never Everr Sarah Lynn will i lose u and never princess will i let you Go
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08-11-04, 01:08 AM
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
awwwwwww ur soooooo fuckin soft nigga! j/k that was straight. u just come up with it now or u been writin it for a while?
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08-11-04, 01:45 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Lol i wrote that 4 my fiance
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08-11-04, 01:56 AM
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
ok i feel u. i was gunna take it and put my girls name in it to give to her buuut naw i wouldnt do that. i respect u too much. n e ways it was tight and u almost write poetry as good as u rap. two gats up!
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08-11-04, 02:22 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
4 sho
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08-11-04, 03:34 AM
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
will i read this fuckin SHIT you call poetry as tha tittle say's NEVER EVER lol
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08-11-04, 01:45 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
I aint no fuckin poetry writer jus some shit i jotted down
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08-11-04, 01:52 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 6B29 12E8
nice poem dawg
im feeling it 8/10
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08-11-04, 03:47 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
4 sho
good lookin out uppin
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08-13-04, 03:29 AM
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IP: 3158 0B2B
damn nice drop...alot of emotion in dat...tell u really put thought into dat...nice vocab...and the repeated thing worked in dis...in otha poems in gets old readin da same shyt but in dis it worked fa it...nice drop good word play...return da favor...peace
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08-13-04, 03:44 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Thanx Fam
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