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Old 08-17-04, 12:30 AM   #1
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Lightbulb my wonderful poem for the day ,yes i said wonderful

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my negativity leads to my creativity ,
"the hate" i feed off of it i guess it led to the insensitvity
i rose from these ashes
picked my fights , and at times bit my lip
but the progress i made , never let me commit
i never trusted no one , made sure to keep my shit straight
a few white lies to cover up anything they could hold against me
i know they wait and ancipate ,
participate in there little games- i dont think so
but surprised by own ingenuity , the acuity that befell me
was simply amazing , i know what they said
raising a kid like me cant be easy so i made it as hard as it could be


*dont get me wrong the trips to hawaii, newyork ,london,paris,caen(northern france for all u dat dont know) all in the span of 6 months is amazing,the trips to the "other house" , the summer house will be forever in me but its time i made something of my self instead of being supported by my family best wishes to the 05 gang "EVERYTHING IS EVERYTHING ,BUT WE ARE SOMETHING YOU DONT SEE EVERY DAY"
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Old 08-17-04, 02:40 AM   #2
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damn kidd another good drop...liked dat one...only thing that was off was da structure...otha than that tho it was a nice poem...feelin those first 5 lines...keep it comin peace
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