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Old 02-16-05, 12:39 AM   #1
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Anotha 1, holla at ur boy, dis real shit. I feel different when Im with this gurl...check her pic out in mugshots

As I lay next to your body, all I see is ever-lasting beauty
To Love, to Care, and to Nurish you isn't my only duty
As I look into your mesmorizing eyes, I get stuck in a trance
Like that fat guy with a music box, making his monkey dance
As I gently rub your face, you do nothin but smile
You wonder why I'm shaking, kause I feel like Kobe in trial
"Everything is alright, breathe, tonight is a good night"
Then again you smile, and you whisper, "I wont bite"
I try to pull you closer to me so our bodies can greet
You rest my hand on your chest to feel your heart beat
"On key" is what you say when I placed your hand on mine
That put a chill in your spine, but I think that was a good sign
Our bodies meet like lines, God made you in the perfect design
I mean your body is devine, but TRUE BEAUTY is what you define
And before I can finish, you stop me with a sweet kiss
"Right now isn't the time to talk and reminisce"
You smile at me again and I say "Y.G.z need LOVE too"
You pause for a minute to tell me "Thats why I LOVE you"

Feed back my niggz and beezies
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Old 02-16-05, 12:54 AM   #2
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its still early on the west coast
no one?
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Old 02-16-05, 07:14 PM   #3
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i liked this, i like how you show your feelings and arent afraid to tell a girl how you feel, guys who try too hard to be "hard" are wack, but you described your feelings how they are, and showed a softer side, thats a good quality, show this to the girl, keep it up..1
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Old 02-16-05, 08:36 PM   #4
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not a bad poem. definitely can see the emotion in this. very easy to tell that it truly is coming from your heart, which i like. keep writing.
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Old 02-16-05, 11:02 PM   #5
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Thanx, i gave it to her and she smiled and gave me a kiss
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Old 02-17-05, 12:19 AM   #6
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Very nice mayn. I can see you aren't afraid to show your emotions and being honest with a girl is what always pulls you thru. I liked this. Very very good. 10/10
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Old 02-17-05, 01:35 PM   #7
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thanx mayne

bumpin this bitch
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Old 02-17-05, 04:21 PM   #8
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yea my nigga i can guess to who thiz gurl waz mayn iz it francessca blood my niggaz in love and shit but good 10/10
do it big liked it seems like u really care bout her koo
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Old 02-17-05, 05:03 PM   #9
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^^lol u a fool , but yea its to her
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Old 02-18-05, 03:20 PM   #10
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bumpin
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Old 02-19-05, 01:53 AM   #11
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bumpin
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Better RTF.. Dayum. lol
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Old 02-19-05, 03:29 AM   #13
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i liked this
i like how you show your feelings and
arent afraid to tell a girl how you feel
great shit 10/10
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Old 02-20-05, 02:13 PM   #14
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Cali love baby
good lookin

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Old 02-21-05, 03:59 PM   #15
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Damn bro....i read the intro at school and shit but you finished this off with a nice emotional touch....10/10..have the teacher post this one on the wall....man...are you holding back on me G?....seems like it....LOL...anyways...personally, and im sure most of you feel this way...TiLT should be poet of Feb...anyways...stay up fam..pz.

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