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Alright here it is, if you don't get anything my AIM is Ldizzle Ibizzle...dont be afraid to ask.

Afraid of this kid? He's from Canada, tension wont be made hur
Only reason I'm feelin the heat...is cuz I'm closer to the equator
Drakel aint comin nice, so settle man, ya need ta sit
This kids a pussy.....the way his rhymes only fetus shit
Kis your life is on the net, crack open a beer and neva see sun
Shit, this cat chases the mouse more than Tom & Jerry re-runs
Drakel? Come on ya herb, ill snipe you out without sin dude
Cuz i'll put a red dot on your head...and I aint callin you hindu
Come on dog, your location is played enough, u need pure help
Why would I need to flip shit around on you, when ya do it yourself
Kes you used to be good, can u tell me what happened yo?
Shit I lost my train of thought.....yours de-railed months ago

I wont waste my time adding ' 's around wordplay...just use your brains.

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i'll wish you good luck, but you aint worth it to shake my hand
cause nobody cares for you, just look, even your avy hates you man
droppin fresh shit? well knowing you, should probly wash ya drawers
cause if my initial reaction of you was right...the loss is definately yours
LI always spits it whack, wouldn't believe anythin from this lame
truth is, everything this bitch says just takes after his name
its a shame, spitting by myself since were suppose to match wits
cause the spark that lights his lamp just aint quite li't'
best of '04 eh, must be a lot of dick riders to be thanked
far from the best, seeing how you're only the 4th seed ranked
nevermind in too deep, the shit you spit has flood your mind
seem really devoted to droppin whack...but i guess true love is blind

yeah, i have a headache and dont want to explain shit either........word.....gl li

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LI
Afraid of this kid? He's from Canada, tension wont be made hur
Only reason I'm feelin the heat...is cuz I'm closer to the equator
good open, ending flow was off.
Drakel aint comin nice, so settle man, ya need ta sit
This kids a pussy.....the way his rhymes only fetus shit
good.
Kis your life is on the net, crack open a beer and neva see sun
Shit, this cat chases the mouse more than Tom & Jerry re-runs
daz is right, this has been used before.
Drakel? Come on ya herb, ill snipe you out without sin dude
Cuz i'll put a red dot on your head...and I aint callin you hindu
you gave the punch before the open.
Come on dog, your location is played enough, u need pure help
Why would I need to flip shit around on you, when ya do it yourself
decent...
Kes you used to be good, can u tell me what happened yo?
Shit I lost my train of thought.....yours de-railed months ago
good close, dont use YO just so your line will rhyme.

*ok your verse was good, had some
originality in it. your flow was awful
at first, but it started to pick up after
the first bar. you had good punches.
one of them was played. not a big
deal, since dropping played lines is
an RV fad. but decent. drop.

Drakel
i'll wish you good luck, but you aint worth it to shake my hand
cause nobody cares for you, just look, even your avy hates you man
good open, but dont end with a pronoun.
droppin fresh shit? well knowing you, should probly wash ya drawers
cause if my initial reaction of you was right...the loss is definately yours
haha, fire.
LI always spits it whack, wouldn't believe anythin from this lame
truth is, everything this bitch says just takes after his name
decent.
its a shame, spitting by myself since were suppose to match wits
cause the spark that lights his lamp just aint quite li't'
good intent, but a little weak.
best of '04 eh, must be a lot of dick riders to be thanked
far from the best, seeing how you're only the 4th seed ranked
very true, but need to step it up.
nevermind in too deep, the shit you spit has flood your mind
seem really devoted to droppin whack...but i guess true love is blind
haha, real dope line. best closure this week.

*wow, i was amazed by your open
and close. your wordplay was hot.
the flow that carried your punches
was good, and i saw a multi, you
should have dropped more of em
though. great read. punches were
good, and the fact that most if not
all were personals gave you my vote.

vote: Drakel

hot verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph

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L.I.

Afraid of this kid? He's from Canada, tension wont be made hur
Only reason I'm feelin the heat...is cuz I'm closer to the equator
good...6/10
Drakel aint comin nice, so settle man, ya need ta sit
This kids a pussy.....the way his rhymes only fetus shit
6/10
Kis your life is on the net, crack open a beer and neva see sun
Shit, this cat chases the mouse more than Tom & Jerry re-runs
weak....3/10
Drakel? Come on ya herb, ill snipe you out without sin dude
Cuz i'll put a red dot on your head...and I aint callin you hindu
damn...heard it in a banks song...heard it in a fabolous song...heard it in a fat joe song...and this other dude...this bar is played as fuck...2/10
Come on dog, your location is played enough, u need pure help
Why would I need to flip shit around on you, when ya do it yourself
ehhhh....5/10
Kes you used to be good, can u tell me what happened yo?
Shit I lost my train of thought.....yours de-railed months ago
bice....8/10

overall-30/60(50%)

Drakel

i'll wish you good luck, but you aint worth it to shake my hand
cause nobody cares for you, just look, even your avy hates you man
that was decent...5/10
droppin fresh shit? well knowing you, should probly wash ya drawers
cause if my initial reaction of you was right...the loss is definately yours
first line was nice...second was a good follow up...7/10
LI always spits it whack, wouldn't believe anythin from this lame
truth is, everything this bitch says just takes after his name
ehhh...4/10
its a shame, spitting by myself since were suppose to match wits
cause the spark that lights his lamp just aint quite li't'
skraight...5/10
best of '04 eh, must be a lot of dick riders to be thanked
far from the best, seeing how you're only the 4th seed ranked
ehhhh...5/10
nevermind in too deep, the shit you spit has flood your mind
seem really devoted to droppin whack...but i guess true love is blind
nice...8/10

overall-34/6-(57%)

vote-drakel

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Looks like I'm out of this. It's whatever. Good job Drakel, you got the votes, and thats all that counts. So big ups. I said after this I'm hanging up my RV jersey. Stay up dog.

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