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05-10-03, 03:12 PM | #1 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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05-11-03, 10:35 PM | #2 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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guess no one likes this one.....
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05-12-03, 12:10 AM | #3 | ||||||
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i think tha concept was good, i like to see ppl make they own shyt, an tha way it was it was structured gave it character, but couldve been more elaborate...
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05-12-03, 02:40 AM | #4 | |||||||
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i thought it was ok. a little bit weak but honestly not all that bad. keep up
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05-12-03, 05:37 PM | #5 | ||||||
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I liked it. It's different than all of the stuff I usually read. You probably could have put more to it though, instead of such short lines. More details, I guess is what I mean.
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05-13-03, 11:18 AM | #6 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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yeah i know its kinda short without details but thats like how i made it somehow....but yeah..thanks
uppin!
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05-13-03, 04:38 PM | #7 | |||||||
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I really didn't get into this peace could have been arranged alot better.
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