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Old 05-12-03, 08:03 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Beautiful Carcasses....

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See the…youth in these Beautiful Carcasses?
See the…truth in these Beautiful Carcasses.
See our…Roots in these Beautiful Carcasses.

Kings and Queens suspend below god, while,
Devil’s heaven plays puppeteer, and,
Unspoken Martyrs see Africa awaiting them in the river.
Oh No! They impress,
Don’t stand and deliver,
To just hang as a Nigger!


See the…pride in these Beautiful Carcasses?
& The bleeding hides of these Beautiful Carcasses?
Tossed aside were these Beautiful Carcasses.

Esau dragged me to infinity,
But my skin’s resilient after forty score.
Necks bear swollen deathmark. Should I smile?
At least angels float on their own will.
Bulging eyes remain searching for home still, and,
Your rope is not a fashion statement!


They…laughed at the plentiful Beautiful Carcasses.
Then…gasped in envy at the Beautiful Carcasses.
We still have new millennium Beautiful Carcasses?

We are no longer your engineering ornaments.
Past souls’ soles near Exodus’s culmination, while,
This day I dance with Queenie to Djembe drums, while,
My ancestral brethren glide with us deflecting mockery, Now!
Respect our Nubian omnipotence, for,
Your largest noose is too small for gods and goddesses, Now,


They flee the likes of these Beautiful Carcasses.
You see the…light in these Beautiful Carcasses?
You’ll feel the…life of these Beautiful Carcasses.

Feel The…Life!

Of.
These.
Beautiful.
Carcasses.



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Old 05-12-03, 08:39 PM   #2
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lOVELY IMAGINARY CONTEND I WUS FEELIN THE VIBE OF IT IT PAINTED PICTURES IN MY HEAD ...LOL


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Old 05-13-03, 07:34 PM   #3
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Old 05-14-03, 05:01 PM   #4
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Yeah, my brother, too many people want to forget...but we must be reminded...Kinda gives me the same feeling as 'Strange Fruit' by Billie Holiday...a siick to my stomach mixed with admiration for the creativity of the words...a dropped bomb and then a dropped package of food....it's hard to digest but yet it tastes sooo good...Keep droppin' em....
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Old 05-29-03, 11:40 AM   #5
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Old 05-29-03, 12:07 PM   #6
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this was real I mean strictly I felt the emotion to the point where I had to read it twice but being on RB it's gonna get slept on majorly anyhow I loved the imagery that waz the best all in it self
I mean this was a ill ass poem I felt it very much so I hope to see more pieces like this from you very nice :P
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Old 05-29-03, 12:27 PM   #7
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Thanks..Ive dropped some other ones like this too..if you just search for my posts..

thanks for the positive feedback..

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Old 05-31-03, 05:18 PM   #8
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Its Alright...Just Make It A Litle Bit More In Depth And It Will Be Straight

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