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Old 05-14-03, 06:22 PM   #1
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Get off

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Look out my window and what do I see
all eyes and ears
and they strictly on me
cant walk out my door
without somebody askin what for
can even take a shit without some bish sniffin it
Dont worry about me
You dont even wanna go where I go
or see what I see
so get out my ass
with tha 21 question trash
nigs irkin me like a rash
there aint enough vasiline in the world
asshos make me wanna hurl
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Old 05-14-03, 06:39 PM   #2
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I'm not feelin it you got stuff thats way better than this. It was...um... dang when I find the word, But anyway I've seen what you can do and this aint it! Try again!!!
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Old 05-14-03, 11:56 PM   #3
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Very raw rhyme gurl,
feeling it ...
This was a good topic but i feel you could
of put more detail into it ... coz i was diggin the
topic u seem to have good flow,
look forward to peepin more!

Pz
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