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Old 05-15-03, 09:02 AM   #1
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L.L. (love and life)

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heres another one i wrote its called:

L.L. ( Love and Life)

What is love?
an emotion a disease?
A barring that divides and seperates you and me?
What is life?
Is life about love?
Is life about praying for that person heaven sent from up above?
Does that mean that life is about praying for love?
should we love life?
After it causes pain, misery, not to mention heartbreak & strife.
We go through all 4 of those feelings just by looking for that husband or wife.
what is it really to love someone?
When do you know for sure?
What do you do?
Loving someone is caring for someone ,
you shouldnt keep those feelings deep,
cuz when the person doesnt know,
Is it worth losing sleep?
So whats life?
Have I written enough?
I'll tell you what is ....
LIfe is about love.

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Old 05-15-03, 09:13 AM   #2
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Old 05-17-03, 10:07 AM   #3
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i feel u
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Old 05-21-03, 09:26 AM   #4
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Old 05-21-03, 12:02 PM   #5
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I liked how you question what life and love is in this one. What I read here is kind of how I think. I wonder about something for a while then finally come to an answer, which is what looked like went on here.

"what is it really to love someone?
When do you know for sure?
What do you do?"

I liked that part cause I think about it a lot. I wonder how I would know for sure. What I would do when I did know. Made me think about it a little more. I like when people get me thinking by what they write.

"Loving someone is caring for someone ,
you shouldnt keep those feelings deep,"

That part I liked cause it answers the previous one.

"I'll tell you what is ....
LIfe is about love."

The ending of it was good because you answered the question you started off wondering about. I really do agree with it too. Life is about love. Or it should be. This was a good read. Keep posting more.
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Old 05-21-03, 10:43 PM   #6
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feelin this one. like tha questions u asked. liked tha way u asked wat love and life were bout. like how u finished it off too. im feelin u on this one cuz i can relate. i think that every1 here has questioned this a couple of timez. i kno i have. neways much respect
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Old 05-21-03, 11:03 PM   #7
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thanx yall...still uppin
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