Lil-Trip: had character to your flow, decent drop, could have had better punches, but your flow was on, and you had some creativity, your better chance for the next round...will have to be (get some structure) and your verse will be plenty hot. your opener was good, it was a good opener, b/c it basically set up for the rest of the personals layed down on J DOt, well your closure was just decent, could went out with a bang, but it was lazy if you ask em.
Uppin for votes n to get this closed, lets finish it up, peace
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