It was ok, nothing special tho. U should drop in the open mic section to get more feed on ur raps.


i can rap freestyle or maybe even try to sing till dawn
like those cheerleaders i say to u just bring it on
dont fling it wrong causin me to throw those strong bombs
u gonna be long gone after im done with you
put the gun to u its gonna be a quick flash thru
flashback memories flyin away with ur head on the floor
dead and even more im quick to leave the...................
.................................................. ..scene red on the door
tore thru with ease theres no mercy so dont say please
i spit ice cold so i'll leave u subzero so just freeze

freeze, please, i'mma give u some of these (punches)/ calm down here some weed y don't u roll up the treez and be easy/
your rhymes is weak, y u tryin to tease me/
u on the board fuckin up tryin to talk greasy/
so i'm plottin, sittin back with osama bin laden (bombs)/
somebody said there go bonafide but we neva new u, u were already 4gotten

chi town, chi town yeah its my city/ i'm a shit starter call me the internet 50

n e body wanna battle send me a pm and set that shit up, i'm ready

we in the boxing ring just throwin the punches
the knuckles clash and are blowin the crunches
buckle fast before u crash blowin ur lunch
all over the dash smelling like growin the brunch
hunch over and let it go man im so bored
damn cut the cord and jam on and soar
be home at the core flying free in the air and stare
prepare for anything because thats how life is
striked kids live in this world with all that knife biz
man i should be dead by now red and down
let me die with the crown all in my bed and sound
all quiet silent complete peace finally i have it
went thru the violent defeat.....................
.................of dynasty and it was only half of it
captured it in mind thru the rapture intwined
wrapped around crime with twisted beings in line

i ain't even gotta spit man u killed urself/ grab a gun call it a banana and peel urself/ u weak as hell/ rap game fuckin u, like ya daddy did u in jail/ and ya mama prostituding tryin to make ur bail/ and whats even worst she looks like a bat outta hell

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im bored as fuck cus its 3 am
rolled my last joint picked out the stems
take a drink of r & r for my thurst
justa realizing that im not the worst
take a drag of the joint, wat a feeling
gotta brand new t.v. i love steeling

im the bad boy bringin the mad joy leave u hangin
see me bangin crazy chillin u hear that clangin
thats the gangin of the screams and hidden dreams
bitter scenes of schemes and those ridden gleams
so it seems that im alone on my own for myself
create gore for wealth going to the core for health
store for stealth like a black jet flyin above you
its hard when no one loves you nevermind hugs you
they drug you to believe but society lied to me
i got anxiety stressed to change my variety
now i got problems in mind that arent even mine
believe that im leavin signs for future reference
im immovable like a suture and thats my preference

..wen i come through and blass..
..cuz i be gettin major cash..
..my raps give niggahz a mind crash..

6 line minimum first warning
-Poetic Artist-

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...Why We Fightin 2 Live Homie.....
...If We Livein 2 Die.....

gripin tha mic, starin at tha crowd
opend jaws? tha shit bout 2 fall out
duno hw 2 feel tha blood pumpin
rushin .... like a blood concushion
mind bobblin feel superior
like green goblin......inferioir
lyrical.... tha individuals
literal.... all tha liberals
getnn physical.
feelin liek fallin callin
familis mouriin..
goin of topic.
xceedin like ceeds in crops>
makin circles of emcees in pots

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LOYAL TO THE GAME IN ANY WEATHER



(X)CeeD

leavin them hott, I grip the sniper weapon to take your life in seconds
so test me, and see where ya chest be..
let's see, I'm off of the chain noones stoppin the reign
I got, locked I'm insane and my thoughts in my brain
need psyciatric advice, I'm trafficin ice...
like african sites, I spear your intestines ..I rap it so nice,
you need to back away, from the rapper jay..he'll end you..//
comprehend you..hell is where I'll send you..//
so attend to..the seminar...and see if heaven's hard..//
enough to stop, the cocky ass black version of rocky..//

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I'm the cocky ass black version of rocky/ my punch lines are dangerous so these niggaz scared to box me/ i'll send u niggaz with ur toes pointed up, thats fucked up/ how i hit u with that flow and ya ass froze up/ it ain't no close ups, at ya funeral cuz u gotta face like medusa/ i was put here to abuse the user

Came back just 2 drop a lil something on ya'll
same jack i aint change facts i just put it on tha wall
black like soot all in tha hall im quick to drop
shits gon pop get krunk make the motherfucker hot
man i got rhymes for days so its time to raise
im blind in phrase so i gotta get signed for praise
the line is glazed ima go over the crime u phased
show u signs of crazed things my mind's amazed
shit that flow was incredible so unforgettable
are u ready tho i dont think u are its so regrettable
and thats it for now til i come down from tha sky
u hear tha sound in my ride now its time to say bye

~PEACE~

diss and ill trash ya more, as my words crash ya whores..
straight jacket on in a rockin chair swingin back and fourth..
watch me go back to the ice age in my flux capacitor...
hits will smother ya vision, after they knock u to another dimension..
ima put ya remains in my basement tonight if i dont come to other decisions...
force feed ya body parts till ya jeans rip after the seams bustin...
strap explosives on my waist at mcdonalds and show my appetite for destrucshin..

I feel sick cuz i peel quick out the door
i doubt my core will make it to the store
as my body hits the floor i hear hold ya head
fold u dead, never give up stay bold as lead
im slippin from reality my mentality is gone
in actuality im the last morality thats on
dawn is when i will rise and see the real lies
steel flies seal ties lets go and flow and kill cries

blahhh.................