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Old 11-11-04, 02:04 AM   #1
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Yes, i liked ur vocab and multi's in it, jst that it kind of seemed like you rushed it alittle. Alot of people when they hear their songs think that its really good, which gets in the way of improving. I'm not sayin u suck, cuz u don't, ur very good, n i know that. Just that instead of makin it good vocab and stuff like that, try to make the song something that you would bob your head too
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Old 11-11-04, 08:57 AM   #2
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Aight...Yea I Was Kinda Thinking That Myself...

I Want To Elevate To The Point Where MY Songs Are On The Intellect Level of Cannibus and Flow Like Talib Kweli..

:-D..One Day

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Old 11-11-04, 12:31 PM   #3
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Aight...Yea I Was Kinda Thinking That Myself...

I Want To Elevate To The Point Where MY Songs Are On The Intellect Level of Cannibus and Flow Like Talib Kweli..

:-D..One Day

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word at talib's flow.....damn that some high ambition....i like that

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Old 11-11-04, 11:58 AM   #4
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can i spit on dis?
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Old 11-11-04, 02:06 PM   #5
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man we should have a big crew, i say let all three of them in, it'll just make everything easier ya dig
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Old 11-11-04, 02:38 PM   #6
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It's Not A Crew.....It's An Audio Group....A Serious One To Get Heard With...

Poll Mayn....What You Think of Da Song? You up To Drop On it?

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Old 11-11-04, 02:39 PM   #7
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When there's a open space in this, holluh at me, cuz but that time, imma have 10 tracks out
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Old 11-11-04, 03:01 PM   #8
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aight ima hope on this track r-rated......ill have my spit done by tomorrow afternoon
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Old 11-11-04, 06:19 PM   #9
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NiCe Nice...

I Hope It Turns Out Well...

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Old 11-11-04, 07:40 PM   #10
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i wanna hop on dis shit as well, ima spit tommorow, holla at me
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Old 11-11-04, 08:28 PM   #11
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yo i spit a sample of my verse on my soundclick page. this is justa rough draft of my verse, cuz meth wanted to peep it lol
so holla at me
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Old 11-11-04, 08:43 PM   #12
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yea its dope 20 but let me spit right afta r-rated......cause i got an idea for that spot then just spit fire on tha rest
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Old 11-11-04, 10:10 PM   #13
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I'am Rerecord My Verse, and Fill In All The Hooks So My Parts Will be Complete...

Then It Will Go New Method......Then 20 Grand.....

My Finished Part Will Go Up On My Soundclick, Then Meth Record On It, Post It Up On Your Soundclick, Grand Record On It........Post It Up.....(That Will Be The Finished Version)

I Will Make A Band Page For Soul 2 Def......Put Some Finishing Edges On The Song...and Post It Up On Da Page.

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Old 11-11-04, 10:11 PM   #14
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ight fo sho
this is gonna be tight mayne
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Old 11-11-04, 10:34 PM   #15
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ight i wrote a longer verse since im spittn last, its fuckn tight
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