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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...397#post1000397

yo here goes am newbie ta rb as it says ne criticisms welcome

ill spit this shit slow so that u can get it right//
i flow at the speed of light//
when i spit its liek dynamite//
with punches like gasoline when i ignite//
i make youre whole family disunite//
then i celebrate ma success with a sprite//
and dont go lukin for santa cos u just mite get a frostbite//
when i step to the mic i openly recite//
that youre lyricals skills are pure finite, so lets fight//
you dont know when im gonna hit ya cos im like a meteorite//
as it hits the earth it causes a quake but affects me sleight//
smashes youre sattelite dish so thers no gramhem norton//
for you tonight or next autumn//

yo im spite, but i cant polite, saw u mum last night//
damn!...that bitch gave me a fright//
she definatly got a big appetite//
she stuck to ma dick like a parasite//
she knew how to use her mouth and treat ma dick right//
lastly to highlight that im bright//
i have u wacked and buried then i extradite a flight//
to hawai, in the sunlight ma skin burn right//
i bet i make your head turn titght