post da shit by da end of da day nigga or else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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no hate votes
no dickriding
no crew votes
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MuSick rhymes couldn't punch my ass even if I was a punching bag
Rap Battler's use Zoloft to read Musick rhymes are depressing and sad
do da math of da odds 3 plus 15 equals 17
flows get fucked like highschool porno teens
you fell off and jus have gotten batted out da "RB" stadium
chewed and spat as much as baseball players changing gum
now MuSick instead of resting in piece rest in pieces
photograph your loss in a picture frame to freeze it
my ass on da toilet to dump rhymes on your ass
a fresh newb wearing diapers bout to get a rash
don't get mad and pissed over a complex diss
now i'm off da toilet and your drenched in shit

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The reason why ur girl went astray
Cuz u got fags dippin inside like u was an ashtray
Imma man of industry
Ur unknown ur a man of mystery when im finished ur history
I take it u hate newbies
The rhymes u use to duel me only fuel me to make ur verse literally 'not to be'
U've been in the sun too long
Ur bein out-done an out-shone it's ur shitty textee verse thats all wrong
If i lose its corruption
U must be registered more times than one now bare wiv me im nearly done
Now don't go uppin
Cuz if u do then u've made a mistake it should be ur wrists that u cuttin

rap/rhyme: ak-mixa had too many lines which didn't rhyme (should have wrote seventeen not 17) especially gum and stadium. i like MuSick line when he rhymed 2 times but he could of ended it with the same rhyme.
ak-mixa floped when he brought out "instead of resting in piece rest in pieces"
i was also happy MuSick defended newbies

winner: MuSick, because ak's rhymes didn't always fit and sometimes didn't fit at all.

thats one nil to me
This my first battle imma newbe
Ur ova the hill AK on a slippery slope G

1-O
Uppin

uppin...................................

musick you and your friend are dumb fucks, and your shit is gay, and mc.deadeye is a Newb and can't vote for you stupid bitch check da polls...........................fuckin Newb with no talent............................................ ..........

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This battle was aight, but...

Musick: U had okay wordplay, but ur structure and flow was straight garbage. Ur punches were decent, but they were not enough to take him. U gotta elevate next time, man.

Ak-Mixa: U had good wordplay, ur structure and flow was kinda wack but way better than his. Ur punches were good, but u gotta come even stronger. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: ak-mixa

uppin for more votes come return da favor............................................. ............
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KID KILLA, Quit riding AK's dick................villin

MuSick rhymes couldn't punch my ass even if I was a punching bag
Rap Battler's use Zoloft to read Musick rhymes are depressing and sad
^thought it was ok... could have been worded better, ok W/play
do da math of da odds 3 plus 15 equals 17
flows get fucked like highschool porno teens
^wasnt very consistant with the bar above... ok, but weak W/P
you fell off and jus have gotten batted out da "RB" stadium
chewed and spat as much as baseball players changing gum
^didnt rhyme... ok meta, but didnt hit too hard
now MuSick instead of resting in piece rest in pieces
photograph your loss in a picture frame to freeze it
^nice multi, ok personal... hit ok...
my ass on da toilet to dump rhymes on your ass
a fresh newb wearing diapers bout to get a rash
^didnt like the rhyming, same word,NO... again the wordplay was quite weak.. hit harder
don't get mad and pissed over a complex diss
now i'm off da toilet and your drenched in shit
^weak closer,...flowed good,, but didnt hit...

The reason why ur girl went astray
Cuz u got fags dippin inside like u was an ashtray
^could have been worded better, and hit harder
Imma man of industry
Ur unknown ur a man of mystery when im finished ur history
^good flow but this is a battle.... punch?
I take it u hate newbies
The rhymes u use to duel me only fuel me to make ur verse literally 'not to be'
^seemed forced
U've been in the sun too long
Ur bein out-done an out-shone it's ur shitty textee verse thats all wrong
^weak punch again....
If i lose its corruption
U must be registered more times than one now bare wiv me im nearly done
^didnt hit,,, be more direct
Now don't go uppin
Cuz if u do then u've made a mistake it should be ur wrists that u cuttin
^weak closer... it should be nice and strong, to finish things up...

all in all.... Ak takes this one, better worddplay, structure and harder hitting punches..... vote=Ak

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A.K mixa took this one,


ak, you had some nice punches, overall your verse was pretty weak, but you came with some nice concepts an some played concepts, your complexity varied throughout the battle, your punches didn't really hit hard!!

MuSick, damn their wasn't really anything in your verse that stood out, not really any direct hard hitting punches, i would say no complexity, but it is the lowest point of simplicity, ou just need to elvate read battles, an tutorials, an you will get better!!


vote AkMixa
a better verse, with harder hitting punches!!

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Im feelin Musick verse better it had a better flow to it and it felt like it came natural as i read it.

One Vote For Musick.

ak got this shit by a mile is shit was complex and had good punches along with flow..musik ur shit was streched and had poor flow and ur strucyture was terrible..

vote ak

plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122

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uppin for votes and feedback.......................................... .....com'n damnitt

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