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05-30-04, 09:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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troublesome vs. king solo
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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05-30-04, 10:39 PM | #2 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 3BA8 8F32
yea i'm checkin in to this battle!!!!
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05-31-04, 01:20 PM | #3 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 84AD 8ED3
yup
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06-01-04, 09:01 AM | #4 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: A819 E872
i'm just gonna drop like 10 lines
u can drop the full 16 if u want |
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06-02-04, 10:39 AM | #5 | ||||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD57 DC5A
Battle begun...I haven’t spit a line…already ure chances are lookin slim
Sumthin about Troublesome……………….. Quote:
I’ll bust ure nose cuz that’s the only way you’ll get anything flowing You cud take 20 laxatives and ure ass still couldn’t get any shit going You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight This bitch not respecting no one going around acting all troublesome Then I see him votin for me, got split personalities, I guess u double dumb U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record |
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06-03-04, 11:52 PM | #6 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 84AD 8ED3
I'll ring ya neck, I don't hesitate to swing at vets
It's like we're playin' chess the way Trouble got King in check Fuck what Hova said, i'm throwin' rocks at the throne I'll crack up ya skull just to give you an extra funny bone Have you running home, and he's been keepin this on the low-low... His homosexual tendencies explain why the King is Solo Now i'm breaking your frame, while staking the claim that i'm taking the fame Looks like you got in a fight with the Caps Lock when you were making your name Now in my third week, King aint playin on my stereo Why? Blacks don't wanna hear K three times in a row |
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06-04-04, 12:37 PM | #7 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 1ECF 8460
get uppin the votin on this....................................
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06-04-04, 03:31 PM | #8 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: 3240 794D
king - good drop...sum stretched lines...but okay flow....good punches....funny meta's....decent personals....a bit over avergae verse....had complex lines and pucnhes so points there....just a lil over decent spit....seen better from u but ur elevatin ur style....so i respect that...
troublesome - another lil over decent drop....flow was okay....but choppy cuz of stretched lines....not as complex of a verse....good punches....not as great metaphors as king...personals were good...but u need to elevate on more complexity to ur verse....like better meta's....and punches....good spit.... Vote - King Solo...everything was even he just had a more complex verse....
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06-04-04, 08:08 PM | #9 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 919D 9DA1
Hmm... pretty good battle, I think King was a nice line away from winning this battle, but -Trouble- took it in my mind. The "king in check" thing is a played concept but flipped well I think, homosexual tendancies was nice.
" You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight This bitch not respecting no one going around acting all troublesome Then I see him votin for me, got split personalities, I guess u double dumb U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record" ^ see... you started off nice, but this is all kinda weak. the concepts aren't great or are played, the lines are a tad stretched and you didn't really word shit too well. also, league battles count towards record, but either way the closer ain't fantastic. v/ -T-
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06-05-04, 12:19 PM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: D20A 40EC
King 1-1 Troublesome
but we all know shadows edge don't like me but oh well, carry on votin |
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06-05-04, 12:27 PM | #11 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 222F 93B9
King...the use of a quote by your opponent works only when it's self incriminating. Trouble speaks in the 3rd person which suggests he was talking about someone else. So, that gag didn't work bro, sorry.
I’ll bust ure nose cuz that’s the only way you’ll get anything flowing You cud take 20 laxatives and ure ass still couldn’t get any shit going You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight ^^ Decent punches...some kinda played..e.g., laxative lines... U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record ^^ Dartboard was good visual but weak...2nd punch was good but the rhyming sucked Inconsistent verse in my opinion King...20/30 I'll ring ya neck, I don't hesitate to swing at vets It's like we're playin' chess the way Trouble got King in check Fuck what Hova said, i'm throwin' rocks at the throne I'll crack up ya skull just to give you an extra funny bone ^^ dawg, you could have won this battle had you come with a little more complexity Looks like you got in a fight with the Caps Lock when you were making your name Now in my third week, King aint playin on my stereo Why? Blacks don't wanna hear K three times in a row ^^ And, work on your flow. This shit sounds like you're talking, not rapping. 18/20 King...you barely eeked this one out Vote: King |
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06-05-04, 03:51 PM | #12 | ||||
New to RB
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IP: AD20 C741
Trouble won hands down in my opinon
King lyrics wordplay and style is straight choppy I just couldn't get a feel at all when i read it Punches-Trouble Vocab-King Multis-Trouble Wordplay-Trouble Trouble GMV Last edited by *:LIGHTSHIFT:* : 06-05-04 at 03:52 PM. Reason: Didn't put who won |
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06-05-04, 10:07 PM | #13 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: FE57 6981
^^^can u say DICKRIDER!!!!!
but now it's 2-2 i can't change that keep the votes comin |
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06-05-04, 10:50 PM | #14 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
kingsolo u had nice flow structure and punchlines
i think you cam e way harder than this troublesome kat king you had hard hitting punchlines and some that didnt hit so hard but most hit pretty hard and u came strong overall 8 trouble some you need to come harde on flo and punches and thats what lost u the battle my vote king solo
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06-06-04, 04:44 PM | #15 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
hmm pretty good battle...
for once i actually enjoyed it... you can tell that both of you are smart people...i i just believe that king solo's shit was alittle bit more complex,,,and harder hittin v- king... he didn't have great flow...but everything else edged t's verse
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