deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

yea i'm checkin in to this battle!!!!

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yup

i'm just gonna drop like 10 lines

u can drop the full 16 if u want

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Battle begun...I haven’t spit a line…already ure chances are lookin slim
Sumthin about Troublesome………………..

I’ll bust ure nose cuz that’s the only way you’ll get anything flowing
You cud take 20 laxatives and ure ass still couldn’t get any shit going
You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight
Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight
This bitch not respecting no one going around acting all troublesome
Then I see him votin for me, got split personalities, I guess u double dumb
U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board
Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record

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I'll ring ya neck, I don't hesitate to swing at vets
It's like we're playin' chess the way Trouble got King in check
Fuck what Hova said, i'm throwin' rocks at the throne
I'll crack up ya skull just to give you an extra funny bone
Have you running home, and he's been keepin this on the low-low...
His homosexual tendencies explain why the King is Solo
Now i'm breaking your frame, while staking the claim that i'm taking the fame
Looks like you got in a fight with the Caps Lock when you were making your name
Now in my third week, King aint playin on my stereo
Why?
Blacks don't wanna hear K three times in a row

get uppin the votin on this....................................

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king - good drop...sum stretched lines...but okay flow....good punches....funny meta's....decent personals....a bit over avergae verse....had complex lines and pucnhes so points there....just a lil over decent spit....seen better from u but ur elevatin ur style....so i respect that...

troublesome - another lil over decent drop....flow was okay....but choppy cuz of stretched lines....not as complex of a verse....good punches....not as great metaphors as king...personals were good...but u need to elevate on more complexity to ur verse....like better meta's....and punches....good spit....

Vote - King Solo...everything was even he just had a more complex verse....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Hmm... pretty good battle, I think King was a nice line away from winning this battle, but -Trouble- took it in my mind. The "king in check" thing is a played concept but flipped well I think, homosexual tendancies was nice.

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You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight
Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight
This bitch not respecting no one going around acting all troublesome
Then I see him votin for me, got split personalities, I guess u double dumb
U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board
Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record"

^ see... you started off nice, but this is all kinda weak. the concepts aren't great or are played, the lines are a tad stretched and you didn't really word shit too well. also, league battles count towards record, but either way the closer ain't fantastic.

v/ -T-

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

King 1-1 Troublesome

but we all know shadows edge don't like me
but oh well, carry on votin

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King...the use of a quote by your opponent works only when it's self incriminating. Trouble speaks in the 3rd person which suggests he was talking about someone else. So, that gag didn't work bro, sorry.


I’ll bust ure nose cuz that’s the only way you’ll get anything flowing
You cud take 20 laxatives and ure ass still couldn’t get any shit going
You could continuously line-bite; it still won’t help u to win this fight
Cuz when ure fat ass puts on clothes, that’s the only time that u ever tight

^^ Decent punches...some kinda played..e.g., laxative lines...


U cudn’t hit the bullseye if you were standing an inch from the dart board
Always battling in the league so when u lose it don’t fuck up ure record

^^ Dartboard was good visual but weak...2nd punch was good but the rhyming sucked

Inconsistent verse in my opinion King...20/30


I'll ring ya neck, I don't hesitate to swing at vets
It's like we're playin' chess the way Trouble got King in check
Fuck what Hova said, i'm throwin' rocks at the throne
I'll crack up ya skull just to give you an extra funny bone


^^ dawg, you could have won this battle had you come with a little more complexity
Looks like you got in a fight with the Caps Lock when you were making your name
Now in my third week, King aint playin on my stereo
Why?
Blacks don't wanna hear K three times in a row

^^ And, work on your flow. This shit sounds like you're talking, not rapping.

18/20

King...you barely eeked this one out


Vote: King

Trouble won hands down in my opinon
King lyrics wordplay and style is straight choppy I just couldn't get a feel at all when i read it

Punches-Trouble
Vocab-King
Multis-Trouble
Wordplay-Trouble

Trouble GMV

^^^can u say DICKRIDER!!!!!

but now it's 2-2
i can't change that

keep the votes comin

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kingsolo u had nice flow structure and punchlines
i think you cam e way harder than this troublesome kat
king you had hard hitting punchlines and some that didnt hit so hard

but most hit pretty hard and u came strong
overall 8


trouble some
you need to come harde on flo and punches
and thats what lost u the battle
my vote
king solo

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