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HellRaZoR | 0 | 0% | |
-SoLdIeR- | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-18-04, 05:38 PM | #1 | |
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-SoLdIeR- VS HellRaZoR
IP: 2553 ECFD
K, 10 Lines Min
No Recycling No Dickriding Verses Due Within An Hour... K?? Good Luck
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07-18-04, 06:23 PM | #2 | |
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this dudes a hellrazor, but he needs to raise his game,
got merked by gunit , now imm'a put this bitch to shame! you aint gonna beat me even if you bring "van damme", you cant be a "kickboxer", cos no punches you will land, your rhymes are the same every where i Look* , gats, clips n g's.. singin that same old hook! not sweatin you, im so cool, i have to carry de-icer, but to make yourself hot, bitch you have to carry a lighter! your unliked amongst loads, just like brussel sprouts, cos once we get a taste of you, we have to spit it out! this is a nice win for me, and i went easy cos your new! the only good thing from belgium is chocolate, and it aint as sweet as you!! *was given criticism for spittin constantly bout guns n shit! now rap some shit bout guns n that you GANGSTER... ..from belgium.lol
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07-18-04, 06:24 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 5E72 8FB5
muthafucker spit sum shit , who the fuck are you
call up the ambulance , oh shit dont leave yet i wanna fight you sorry if ya gotta go to bed , this aint sum kids playground momma rite there holdin ur hand don't cry she'll be around u aint got shit to say , im here to take yo last breath away tryin to be a rydah , cruisin round ya house with a tricycle all day if ya got beef gonna u tryin to stand ya man this aint like ya backyard playin cowboy start shootin a can rubber bullets won't hit u here , full automatics what u see yo grandpa must have told u to many western story's 4real |
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07-18-04, 06:26 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
lets get some votes on this...........
uppin this bitch
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07-19-04, 05:32 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
uppin...
uppin... uppin... lets get some votes on this bitch!!
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07-19-04, 05:38 AM | #6 | |
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This is stupid shit... clearly -Soldier- got this shit, but both you catz are whack... word up
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07-19-04, 06:15 AM | #7 |
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
^^^yup soldier wins with ease
but i disagree his was wack some nice original punches.like the kickboxer line that de-icer thing and sum others...gud creativity/wordplay overall soldier plz return tha favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135192 |
07-19-04, 06:33 AM | #8 | ||
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Opener: SoldieR Closer: Soldier punches: HellRazoR win: SoldieR Weak battle but SoldieR's shit was good i liked his Opener nyce and his Closer Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-19-04, 12:04 PM | #9 | |
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soldier has this in the bag. i know he'll win.gooooooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooldier
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07-19-04, 04:43 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
lol, thanks...
uppin... finish this shit!! i will repay with an honest vote...
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07-19-04, 07:25 PM | #11 | ||
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Iwas digging ya last 4 lines especially that brussel sprouts line, had me laughing hard also its true what you say bout gunit101 rapping only bout guns sometimes thats aiight but it sound fake coming from someone named gunit 101 (obvious biter) and that verses was 2nd grade vote: soldier |
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07-20-04, 05:17 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
k, how comes i am only winning this 2-0 when all you seem to think i won?? please make sure you vote correctly, thanks ....
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07-20-04, 05:30 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 2553 ECFD
uppin...
need votes people, will return the favour!!
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07-20-04, 05:40 PM | #14 |
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IP: AEC4 3643
Soldier:
Nice opener, you got in a good personal to start it out. I thought the kick boxer line was alright, nothing special, but better than HR, nonetheless. I liked the ragging on his rhymes about guns and clips, another good personal. The de-icer and lighter line was nice. I didn't like the brussel sprouts line... I mean, I know what you meant, but it was a little limp in the wrist, if you know what I mean. Your closer wasn't that good either. It was a good attempt on the Belgium personal, but it didn't really hit hard. Hellrazor: Your opener was lame.. Really really lame. Try harder.. I liked your next bar, but it was kind of a cheap shot. The tricycle was alright. It could have been worded better, but well... it wasn't. The cowboy bar was bad too. Wasn't personal, and not a hard hit at all. The closer was bad too. Didn't rhyme, didn't land, didn't do anything but fill up space. V/ Soldier
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07-20-04, 05:42 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
-SoLdIeR-
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were alright... HellRaZoR structure is pretty good...some of ur lines were a little out of place though...flow is on lock...no multis...u attempted wordplay but it came out wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had a good structure....both had a good flow...-SoLdIeR- had more, and better multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...-SoLdIeR- gets my vote... VOTE - -SOLDIER- PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx... |
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