8-12 lines
blind spits
No feeding
drop after check in

100 posts to vote

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checkin in and will be droppin in a quick sec. hold up.

Here's my check in dude

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Intro:
In the mind-of-a-killa , you should look for signs-of-a-thrilla/
so when my gaul of the murder builds look at these lines-as-a-pillar/
dine-with a deala , of cards of death prime-in-the-build-up/
so when the seeker finds its victim this rhyme-is-familar/

ThoughT
You think ya golden till the beam-explosions hit ya hemoglobin /
ya gums a teeth-loose-hold-and ya bleed from ya spleen-to-scrotum/
the streets dispose weak control heat like a demons-omen/
Squeeze the fo, till his cheeks look like feces while decompose’in/
skeptic to epileptics? I’m seasoned to be-the-chosen/
so I can seize seizures for leisure and leave’em-broken/
my atomic sonnets make nuclei leave-the-prozin/
and brings pain to the point ya joints plead for a scream-to-cope-wit/
worst than any nightmare you just gotta dream-I’m-joke’in/
creeds-I’m-hold’in, till we can perceive that the beef-is-croak’in/
spill ya guts on ya thighs till it look like ya knees-is-choke’in/
and medics see ya stomach say fuck it!! and leave-it-open/
tears freeze if you grieve-while-frozen now G you can’t breathe- for-roast’in/
death spoons and feeds you with ease, please heed-the-doses/
picture ya self as me lives thieved I greed-for-ghost’in/
now smile and say cheese while ya body is seed-for-rodents/

Memory Bank
My whims-come-in-handy, disappear like a gem-from-the Ramsey’s/
get choked till ya throat dries and ya flim’s-feel’in-sandy/
drooling at pictures of the scene like the film-was-some-candy/
cuz my errors highest rating is.... slim-as-it-can-be/
yes I get Savage like a Slim-Jim-wit-Randy/
cut ya torso more so put ya skin-in-da-pantry/
merk cousins uncles and if I’m still-feel’in-Antsy/(/Aunt=Ant)
I’ll make a brand new body from the limbs of ya family/

'Stiffin' You Like 'Arthritis'.. Ya 'Joints'-Are-Tossed..//
He Had To Exceed The Line Limit To Get His Fucking Point-Across..//
Instead I'll Deploit-A-Loss..//
Sending Jabs.. Making Sure I'm Punching-Out-This-Fuck..//
It's Like You 'Escaping Cloverfields'.. Cuz You 'Running-Out-Of-Luck..'//
That Shit Was Nothing But Filler... A Bunch Of Deceiving-Lines..//
I Wonder Which Notebook Did You Fucking Retrieve-Ya-Rhymes..//
That Came Off Paper.. It Did'nt Just Leave-Ya-Mind..//
You A 'Board' Cat 'Elevating'.. Dawg You Got Some 'Trees'-To-'Climb'..//
This Cat Is 'Comical'.. Ya Good-To-'Cap'-On..//
Get Your Whole Profile Embarrased.. Ya Grim Reaper will Make Sure His Hood-Is-Back-On..//
Coming With Heat That My Blows-Equipping..//
I See You Chose-A-Written..//
Getting a Win Off Me? But Like 'Clumsy Garden Tools' this 'Hoe'-Is-'Tripping'..//
I'm Sticking-With-Hits..//
But Like 'Folklores Throwing Up'... You're 'Fiction'-With-'Spits'..//
This Cat Will Get Bum Rushed.. You Stand Stiff-In-A-Blitz..//
Kind Of Like Have 'Bow Movements' In 'Bar-B-Que' Grills.. Cuz Ya 'Shit-Is-The-Pits'..//
I'm A Gift-With-The-Wit..//
'Drop The Beef' Like Laziness And 'Flopping-Of-Cattle'..//
Where The Fuck Are The Disses At.. This Ain't A Topical-Battle..//

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Aiight uppin 4 votes

Good drop dude

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Yeah of course uppin.
Good drop also. Lets get some. This battle is for the respect list.

That shit is hard young.
but my over all vote goes to him because he came harder to me even though you had a hel of a drop also. Nice job. Aye also if you dont have a crew come and holla at us, and I got a top spot for you, after seeing ya post here, one-1 100-hunid.

Damn you on this nigga dick hard. He went over the line limit.
It's straight though, nice explanation.

Uppin

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dam u both had good punches but I have to go with MC for he had more personals( I believe) and he had some comedy and he had a better closure. so my vote goes to MC
hit up on this battle thnx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128196

ayo uppin for votes, god damn, this battle was a min. ago.

Ayo, whoa can I please get this battle out the way, who ever votes on this battle I promise to vote in two of yours. Two for one cant beat that...

hey you weer both really good... but mc's got it

Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one