Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

G'luck john, an a lil tip...dont prezent ya rhymes like u would on winmx, type one line, press enter, an do it like that, aight?

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 09:42 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 09:48 AM.

I met this kid on winmx, showed him round here an now he callin me ''teacher''..
ya see, when apprentice steps to master, its inevitable i'll 'defeat-ya'..
i aint no mr bellding but u lookin alot like screech-huh? (haha)
my texts are so horrifying they'll fuck up ya facial-features!
you dont even have one post an ya trynna call me out..
you fat fuck ya look like humpty dumpty an ya bout to fall, no doubt..
my punches alone gonna make this another 'knockout'..
instead of scheckin in this faggots scared of the font so hes askin how he can CHECKOUT..!!

Yo JOHN, Accept the battle mayn....
remember, 6-8 lines aight?

p e a c e an g'luck

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John Deere Mafia has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-04 06:19 AM.

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Got stripes like Calico
wanna battle so bring it ho
this is round one-this is how it go
ima leave u with memory lapses bury yo flow in caskets
lyrical criminal, individual so u dont even have to ask it
so bring it on dopemayne bring yo chainsaw
here, uncut, redfine it all rugged n raw
so much apologies for u waiting me still no chance of even fadin me
aint my fault u stressin n flippin like a disgruntled employee
toss what u like but u still end up on the slab
if u want some come get some come take a stab
dont bring it weak like water
no shit from yo daughter
everybody else can come witness the slaughter!

HEY! ima figure out this dang site sooner or later!

aight, here's my second one:


Runnin yo lip
talkin ya shit
shouldn't had started-now I gotta let it rip
I ain't a hater if u like A.C. Slater
like Fresh Prince said "Yo Homes smella ya later!"
Here's a lil example to get u trampled
I serve portions both meager n ample
Ask me if I care cuz I bet u skared
go rip out your hair sayin it isn't fair
so nanny nanny to the boo boo
I'll end this note with koo koo ka choo

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Just a quick key i did cause he my boy from ''winmx''...
key'd the first thing that came to mind lol...
no effort from eiher us but can we still get some votes
upiiin yall

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Dont sleep yall
just a quick key from us both, hes my boy
it was a friendly battle an it needs some quick votes so i can get me a slot open for a battle

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Speakin of keys, wtf u slangin
knowin that it aint dope like u claimin
im scopin the words u wrote now im boxin em
hit yo ass quit yo ass cut u short from some oxygen
I dunno if it's hatable but it definately ain't debatable
bout the outcome of this battle cuz hey im unfadable
So let this be a lesson that u have to learn
smash the gas hit the breaks like im makin tires burn
So drop yo guard n I'll drop u hard
goin out like a daredevil with absolutely no regard.
I'm open to all challenges and all the otha crews
for now im out like rooby rooby roooooo

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lol yo john!
how come u keep writin verses?

lol this is purely for voters now mayn lol, if ya wanna drop freestyles or wanna battle other people, either call people out in the bitch slapped thread or drop a freestyle on open mic lol!

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Voted For: Dopeman

Vote DOpe Man

much better wordplay and creativity.....

John deer not bad, could have been better and had more ven bars, but ok some wordplay and a few punches, but over all elevate and use more creativty.........

Got stripes like Calico
wanna battle so bring it ho
this is round one-this is how it go
dont ever start a battle like that
u willl lose

I met this kid on winmx, showed him round here an now he callin me ''teacher''..
ya see, when apprentice steps to master, its inevitable i'll 'defeat-ya'..
this was good, and if it really is true, OWNED

over all dope man had better bars, better punches and wordplay..also he had creativty in his lines.......

So he gets the vote

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Voted For: Dopeman

punches-dope
pers-dope
mul-dope (just)
met-none
best-dope
winner-dope
dope wins
pz