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Ennovy has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 10:35 AM.

Now I don’t wanna fuck ur brain up so ima use a simple lang*
Its crazy how u wash out 58 stains..ur mouth has gatta be big bang
You zombie walking in d rap game,b4 u know it u soon get a ball on ya face**
The only place u rap is in my ass..cos on herre oldies aint got no more space***
This dude thinks he got eyes to see muh fuckers on the RapVerse site
When its his skull we see..cos he been sucked dry outta too much B-bite****
Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit
So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig






*his sig…got a man whos head blows up in to pieces

**y’all shud know how zombie’s walk..and in his sig he got a lil gurl who gets hit with a ball on her head

***his got an asses in his sig….and oldies =vets..he been herre long enuff…lol

****b-bite=blunt bite..dats how we say it over herre


be honest and so shall we be in ya battles....thanx

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 10:37 AM.

13-16 huh ::ha-doo-kin:: i-assault-with a fire-ball-hit you wack bitch
Vonne now just sit back and continue to admire-raw-shyt you cant spit
like elves i "(w)rap-with-skill-and-accuracy" while you sit in your crib So?
i'll bring u "down to earth" like atmospheric-gravity busting you with real lines Ho
rate me just a 7 or an 8.. i wont be upset cuz i'm still "above U" on-the-keyboard
i'm not a fuckin horse so why are u "jockin-me-for?" you fuckin R V whore
i'll leave u roped-in-knots then pull ur "ears" like shoe-laces ,you dont eat emcee's Yvonne stop lying
You switched ya name so much like saimese twins ur known for havin two-faces and look at ya record you should start trying

^^wow....



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Voted For: Ennovy

this was a bit better than ice picks, his wordplay wasnt that good apart from the "above U" line....

yvonne came a lil harder wit a better flow even though this can still be worked on!
not many great punches from anyone but yvonnes were just a lil harder so im'a give it to her...


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yo ice i do vote in peepz battles chill...


uppin this thing!!!

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saying in general for one some newb finally does vote

sl no i wont chill

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Voted For: Ennovy

Okay Imma Give This To Yvonne.

Ice Pick: Ya Structure Was Kinda Streched But Ya Had Multies So It Was Ok. Until Ya Last Bar No Multies And Streched Like Fuck. Flow Was Off In Tha Last Bar.

Punches: Ya First B. Was Just A Statment No Punch
Second B. Again Just A Statment But Ya Had Some Nice Wordplay And Multies.
Third B. This Was Ya Best Punch Nice Meta And That Punch Hit.
Last B. It Was A Tight Bar I Just Felt That It Was Really Streched And The Flow Was Off.

Yvonne: Nice Structure And Ya flow Was Nicely On. You Had Some Multies Here Too Also Nice Metas And Wordplay.

1st Bar: Kinda Weak Didn't Think It Hit At All......
2nd Bar: Good Bar Was A Lil Betta Than Ya First One....
3rd Bar: Nice Punch I Think This was A Personal: Ice's Old Avy
Closer: This Was Ya Best. Nice Wordplay On His Name And Personal About His Sig.

Overall I Give It to Yvonne Cause She Had Some Nice Personals Although I Do Recommend That You Word Ya Shit Better Next Time.

Vote: Yvonne

Voted For: Ice Pick

pick took this one easyily, harder punches, nice wordplay, and some nice personals that i caught in there...

yvonne got better from what i seen, but yo structure was wack...good flow tho...good battle

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