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View Poll Results: Conclusion Vs Final
final 5 71.43%
Conclusion 2 28.57%
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Old 12-06-04, 03:55 PM   #1
Conclusion
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Conclusion vs final

IP: FA63 454B

[font=Palatino Linotype][color=DarkRed]Battle Rules:

10-14 Line's.
No Crew Votes.
No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.
No Dickriding.
This Is a Topical Battle So Don't Vote If You Don't Understand.
Topic:You Come HomeTo Discover Your Girl Is Cheating On You With Another Dude.[B/]


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Old 12-06-04, 03:58 PM   #2
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Conclusion has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 03:58 PM.
 
Old 12-06-04, 04:02 PM   #3
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 04:02 PM.
 
Old 12-06-04, 04:35 PM   #4
Conclusion
Formidable
 
IP: FA63 454B

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Inserted The Newly Cut Key's For My New Crib Into The Keyhole.
Heard Grunt's Of Desperation Entered As a Figure Franticly Rolled.
It Was a Dude Half-Naked With His Boxer's On, My Girl Just Gazed.
I Thought My Mind Had Tripped, Beyond Disbelief I Was Amazed.
A Emotional Scar Imbedded My Memory & Stained My Girl's Trust.
All My Feeling's For Her Were Banished,Love, Passion, & Lust.
I Wanted To Diminish The Dude, But I Was Too Antaganized To Care.
My Girl Sitting There Sobbing, Covered With The Duvet Trapped In a Prysm Nightmare.
First Time This Has Happened To Me, I Didn't Know What To Do.
I Thought She Gave Me Her Heart, Couldn't Absorb The Situation She Put Me Thru.
My Heart Shattered Under Pressure Of My Prolonging Emotion.
Could Tell My Chick Was Seeing Him All Along, He Even Had His Wash Bag & His Lotion.
Wanted To Leave This World, Leave Behind Her Unfaithful Presence.
I Slit Her Wrist's But The Lord, Would Not ...Remove Her Essence.
This Has To Be My Shittest Freestyle Ever lol.
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Old 12-06-04, 08:57 PM   #5
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

it was a clouded night tonight..had sense of murky essence
i had a hunch of wrongdoing, restlessness had its pressence
parked the car,got out,and advanced to the front of the house
entered the key and opened the door..horrified at my spouse
i developed a rage...it plummited to the base of my stomach
it felt like my face ignited and the texture felt rugged
couldnt believe wat i was seeing, its obvious this was a dream
is this just a disguised vision of a man penetrating my queen
gathered back my conscience realized this aint fake its real
with criminal intent, i get the weapon wit most damage appeal
but as i cocked back the axe ready to destroy this disgrace
she pulled a .45 and released 500 pounds of pressure to my face
isnt it bizarre i got hit by the bitch who was just playin me
but dont worry ill decapitate her limbs wen i ressurect my body

good luck
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Old 12-06-04, 09:00 PM   #6
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

wats your alias?...................................
 
Old 12-07-04, 01:44 PM   #7
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-07-04, 03:47 PM   #8
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-07-04, 05:14 PM   #9
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-07-04, 09:24 PM   #10
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

cmon get this shit finished........................
 
Old 12-08-04, 02:39 PM   #11
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-08-04, 08:06 PM   #12
Compose
 
From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-09-04, 03:03 PM   #13
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin................votes are always returned from me...
 
Old 12-09-04, 08:00 PM   #14
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
Old 12-10-04, 02:36 PM   #15
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From: Bronx, NY
IP: D5FE 7245

uppin............................................. .
 
 


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