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Pleim | 5 | 83.33% | |
Youngsoulja | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-05-05, 01:21 AM | #1 |
Flyweight
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Pleim vs Youngsoulja
IP: 1CF2 6A32
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01-05-05, 01:23 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 1CF2 6A32
YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 01:23 AM.
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01-05-05, 01:24 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 01:24 AM.
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01-05-05, 01:33 AM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
Youngsoulja please, man look, you are as whack as can be
But what you need to under-stand, is that you stand-under me After this battle everyone is his crew will be saying they miss him Cuz with his whack ass record even the system couldnt a-system Look at this as learning you are simply and obviously worse Even if you posted in Member Mugshots, noone woulda picture verse Look man, what i do and what i did is considered quite a sin you dont post with a countdown to drop, thats when you'll lose again |
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01-05-05, 01:39 AM | #5 |
Light Weight
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IP: 1CF2 6A32
i stand tall and crush you wit er'step of verb/
you pickin up a mic iz futile,like MJ askin out a girl/ welcome to mah world where da greatest survive/ da lord you might wanna ask to yo inurbane flow to revive/ i see it through yo words dat you prespirin'/ now stop bein scared cuz yo fluids is leakin all over RV's wirin'/ go ahead,call me a bully,but really im da commander in cheif/ you still think ders a god,den how come you just changed to no religous belief/
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01-05-05, 02:20 AM | #6 | |
I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
Voted For: Pleim
lol......Pleim just came harder in all aspects......overall i'd have too say......Pleim got this battle...harder punches,harder personals,,,alll that....better vocab and word play....so this battle would go all to Pleim....Young you need some elavating...your lines made no sense...
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01-05-05, 02:46 AM | #7 |
Light Weight
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IP: 1CF2 6A32
either dat or yo stupid azz need a damn dictionary
damn mah bad dog,im trippin wateva at least you voted
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01-05-05, 03:46 AM | #8 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: C431 103C
Voted For: Pleim
Opener - Pleim, was kinda wack but not as self-glorified as Youngs Closer - Neither, they didnt make much sence, weak punch attemps Punches - Pleim, Young threw them at himself Personals - Neither, didnt see anything Metas - Young, Pleim used none but Youngs was shit Multies - Neither, saw none Structure - Pleim, wtf is with Youngs Vocab - Neither, both were elementary Young: Elevate vocab, harder punches and structure Pleim: Elevate vocab, Personals, and use more multies and Metas. Overall I give Young a gracious 2/10 for the effort while Pleim sits with an hounest 4.5/10...well done, you got my vote...Next time try battlin someone in your own league. Payce. |
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01-05-05, 07:15 PM | #10 |
Flyweight
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IP: F4DA 6058
Voted For: YoungSoulja
you won. better punches and everything. Otha guy came weak no offense. I aint dissin you.keep rappin newbie. pc 1 |
01-06-05, 07:03 AM | #11 |
New to RV
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IP: 2EA7 C517
Voted For: Pleim
pliem won this.. soulja, u gotta be a lil more creative and use some multis.. ur punches werent really hittin and werent really punches.. pliem didnt drop anything great.. mug shots line was nice tho'.. the wordplay in it was kinda played but u flipped it nicely.. vote = pliem |
01-06-05, 07:24 AM | #12 |
Flyweight
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This was feedback posted for YoungSoulja
IP: 1CF2 6A32
good drop im not votin just checkin dis shit out
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01-06-05, 10:13 AM | #13 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: 20F2 FA9C
Voted For: Pleim
YoungSoulja i stand tall and crush you wit er'step of verb/ you pickin up a mic iz futile,like MJ askin out a girl/ ^decent opener i guess welcome to mah world where da greatest survive/ da lord you might wanna ask to yo inurbane flow to revive/ ^bleh @ first line, second is okay i see it through yo words dat you prespirin'/ now stop bein scared cuz yo fluids is leakin all over RV's wirin'/ ^ok... go ahead,call me a bully,but really im da commander in cheif/ you still think ders a god,den how come you just changed to no religous belief/ ^nah, wasn't feeling your opener First of all, fix your structure, up your vocab and i wasn't really feelin your flow. Didnt have any really hardhitting punches or personals in ya verse,some stuff didn't even make sense whatsoever but here and there you got shit that could be good so keep on doing your thing and elevate. Pleim Youngsoulja please, man look, you are as whack as can be But what you need to under-stand, is that you stand-under me ^uhm,wasn't feelin the under-stand/stand-under-thing but other thn that, decent... After this battle everyone is his crew will be saying they miss him Cuz with his whack ass record even the system couldnt a-system ^could've finished better Look at this as learning you are simply and obviously worse Even if you posted in Member Mugshots, noone woulda picture verse ^good one Look man, what i do and what i did is considered quite a sin you dont post with a countdown to drop, thats when you'll lose again ^okay closer Structure and flow were definately better thn the other cat, vocab was okay...Didn't really have bold personals in there but you tried harder to bring him down with good punches. Keep on battling and read sum other stuff to help you out maybe. No hate but my vote goes to Pleim
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01-06-05, 11:11 AM | #14 | |
Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
Voted For: Pleim
this was an entertaining battle, and thats being kind i think. The potential is there with both ya but there is some serious elevating to be done. Pleim's best line: "After this battle everyone is his crew will be saying they miss him Cuz with his whack ass record even the system couldnt a-system" -Good wordplay and good punch. Pleim's worst line: "Look at this as learning you are simply and obviously worse Even if you posted in Member Mugshots, noone woulda picture verse" -Maybe i didnt get it but i thought this was quite weak. youngsoulja's best line: "i stand tall and crush you wit er'step of verb/ you pickin up a mic iz futile,like MJ askin out a girl/" this was ok i guess. bit of a metaophor going on and quite a good punch YS's worst: "i see it through yo words dat you prespirin'/ now stop bein scared cuz yo fluids is leakin all over RV's wirin'/" -an attempt at a metaphor but no quality in this really, punch was weak and failed to hit. Overall Pleim's verse was a lot better. His use of wordplay was good and well-noticed and his punchlines were more clever and harder hitting. YoungSoulja may have had a bad battle but he will get better.
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