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03-14-05, 05:46 PM | #1 | ||||
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Stay Strong... NEW JOINT...
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Yo something i played around with.. Looking for some Honest Feedback...
Song Name: Stay Strong http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wordmanmusic.htm http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2024122 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2024138 Come back to the forum when you can act more maturely and follow the rules
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03-15-05, 12:00 AM | #2 | ||||
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upppin.... for some feed back on this one
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03-16-05, 12:46 PM | #3 | ||||
The Rulers Back
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aiight ill d/l now an lets battle real quick you down?..ill set it up.....
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03-17-05, 09:01 AM | #4 | ||||
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Uppin for some damn Feed!!!!!!!!
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03-17-05, 05:51 PM | #5 | ||||||
20/20 VisioN
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beat is kinda...lame lol
intro is hella long too sounds like u reading when u spit kinda, quality is ehhh, flow is average i guess, work on delevery fo sho voice is... ehhh chorus was interesting, but didnt match the beat
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03-17-05, 08:33 PM | #6 | |||||||
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ok... well then....heres tha truth with no hate
Beat is kinda gay... flow was ok.. pretty good but fell in places voice makes me wanna jump out a window... a destinys child chorus? wtf? overall 5/10 work on energy to... u sound bland like your just reading even tho u may not be reading... be more powerful... mic presence is ok but needs work.... all 100% honesty and no hate |
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