Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
|
View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
LyricalMa$tamind | 5 | 71.43% | |
FaMe | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
03-16-05, 09:57 PM | #1 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
FaMe vs LyricalMa$tamind
IP: 0793 7608
Battle Rules:
Fame gets up 2 20 lines or less if he choses -Lyrical gets 20 Lines No Crew Votes no dickridin 1 verse only Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-19-05 at 09:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
|
03-16-05, 10:00 PM | #2 | |
Guest
|
IP: 0793 7608
LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 10:00 PM.
|
|
03-16-05, 10:09 PM | #3 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 0793 7608
look ima spit first cuz niggas feed like a lyrical leech/
he's mad cuz he's not taken serious like a figure of speech/ but i aint even gotta prove that this nigga is weak/ cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat/ im like damn was 10 2 20 lines to much to handle/ you wanna see a fucked up verse yours will b a perfect example/ played concepts like gun metal, you homos are endless/ make claims of bare'n arms like the second admendment/ you rip me?........................ naw you wont desect shit/ i'll eat this cat like leavin B-n-J (Ben & Jerry) wit a fat depressed bitch/ now my conclusion this niggas losin for not bout ta rap shit/ if you aint no freestyler y the fuck would you wanna blind spit/ bitch you got here by mistake cuz u knew dis battle wuz curtains/ i was ask'd to join this site /you made it here by web surfin/ goes to show that wit mistakes i'll be whitin'em out/ u like a stain on a shirt i get u out wit shout/ Lyrical Ma$tamind had 2 murk u quick/ u got 3 days ta post ur verse/ piece a shit
__________________
LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
03-17-05, 03:06 PM | #4 | |
Guest
|
IP: B467 AFB7
FaMe has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 03:06 PM.
|
|
03-17-05, 04:26 PM | #5 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 1749 C302
post fame
dang u takin all day itz already been n hour n 15 min u got an hour and 15 min left
__________________
LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
03-17-05, 05:09 PM | #6 | |
New to RV
|
IP: B467 AFB7
my 4 bars that i said so here they r...an hurry n post ya shit dont rush me if u aint drop yas homie....
listen... Lyrical's rhymes are 'fragments', thas y hes been 'sentenced' ta prison Now hes spittin behind 'bars', so wat does that tell ya?..his shits pre-written! Homie u need ta git a 'grip', ya 'pencil' cant equip, Violent attacks, shit..somebody give this cat a 'paper CLIP'! U needa 'pic' weather u wana stay or not, buh i suggest u go* Cuz wit that kinda hair u got, yo, all u movin is to and 'fro'!** So no usin stayin, only time ull git ‘pounds’ is if u ‘weigh in’ Wit that said stop ‘ballin’, cuz u cant bring tha ‘March Madness’..so start prayin *pic is tha shit u put in afros an stuff **his avy has that comic book guy wit tha afro lookin hair if ya dont git it dont vote... Aint sur if I need a votin link since I only got like 5 posts...
__________________
Will soon b off wit my rap career....so if yall wanna rememba me...want my 'signature?' |
|
03-17-05, 05:19 PM | #7 | |
New to RV
|
IP: B467 AFB7
wow....neva seen that much filler in my life...if u win ill b very surprised...uppin this, sorry fa tha freepost
__________________
Will soon b off wit my rap career....so if yall wanna rememba me...want my 'signature?' |
|
03-17-05, 06:02 PM | #8 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 1749 C302
we need votes on dis hot battle yall
__________________
LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
03-17-05, 07:30 PM | #9 |
New to RV
|
IP: B525 44D9
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
ehh, weakish battle. but ima give it to LyricalMa$tamind cuz he had better punches. n he had a couple multies. FaMe, not bad, just work on your punches. no hate FaMe. return tha favor pleeze http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177094
__________________
Property Of Wall Street
|
03-17-05, 07:36 PM | #10 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 342F 2906
elaborate more solo creepin b/c the vvote will b
dqed if u dont elab more so please do it
__________________
LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
03-17-05, 08:44 PM | #11 | |
the real man of steel
|
IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
V/lyricalMastamind....this was a good battle....lyric came wit punchs that were hard hittin an creative also had good personals an structure...fame u came wit some good lines but i felt u came to lightly u need to work on more creative punchs.....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR opener=L closer=L structure=tie vocab=l Punchs=L personals=Tie overall=Lyricalmastamind
__________________
E-Style
|
|
03-17-05, 09:31 PM | #12 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
|
IP: 342F 2906
come on yall post some votes
we need votes w/ good explanation and feedback so pick da betta battler vote w/ good feedback and its done pleaseeeeeeeeeeee
__________________
LyricalMa$tamind's Battles-Battle Record(13-3)(7 K.O's)(DQ-2) Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
|
|
03-17-05, 10:02 PM | #13 | |
Flyweight
|
IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
this was a pretty easy one to decide in my book: structure: lyrical's structure was on point... i was feelin the flow the whole time... fame's was kinda hit or miss with each bar, some lines were stretched, and some werent long enough... it was aight, but not good enough punches: this goes to lyrical too... he had good wordplay and creative punches... fame, tho, didnt... opener was poorly worded, but a nice try... pounds line is played... to and fro line was wack... the effort was there, but it wasnt good enough this time... overall: lyrical gets this one with good structure, flow, and hard hittin punches... no hate jus elevate return the favor please links in sig |
|
03-17-05, 10:25 PM | #14 | |
Banned: Biting
|
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: FaMe
aii This Is What I feel Fame Came with a aii opener With The Name Play The Rest of his verse Was Fallin Off Its like he Jus Let his verse Fall Down But He did restore himself Wit Some bars that Were aii ENough for me To Give him the vote ......mastermind You Sort Of messed up you didnt supply n e good punchez that caught my attention But Still You Drop an aii Verse ........Next time work on Punchez instead of jus tryin to make stuff ryme My vote goes To Fame RTF In The Link In my Sig It would be greatly Appreciated |
|
03-17-05, 10:27 PM | #15 | |
Banned: Biting
|
IP: 28AD 5545
No Hate Mayne thats jus How I Felt I see alot of others feel Different
RTF * Honestly * DonT Hate Vote mayne |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|