Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 02-16-05 at 05:07 PM

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Solo Creepin has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 05:09 PM.

NoCkTerNuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 05:17 PM.

yo, since the original agreement was 8 lines max i'll just do 8. sorry i messed that up. good luck homie

This kid is "solo"(so low) he's creepin with himself
his rhymes stink so bad they're a hazard to our health
but he'll get dealt with , when i pelt him with celtic curses
cuz i'll jinx him who thinks he'll win with weak verses
your first diss as a rapper how does it feel?
with a verse like that can this kid be real?
i'll steal your win away and make you pay
today i'm gonna take your short rap career away

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NoCkTerNul VS. Da Problem Child

ayo, when this battles dun... ima leave NoCkTerNuL
writting "Solo Creepin beat me" all up in hiz journal
he thinks he dope cuz he can spell anutha rappers name wrong
he bit hiz name, he bit hiz lyrics, he probly even bit hiz shlong
so dont ask y he's sux at rap and he's always drinkin jiz
cuz tha real knoc explained it, its just "tha way he iz"


lol, my 1st text battle, its wack, i know

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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

Stucture=solo
Flo=solo
Punches=solo
Personals=solo
Multies=none
Mettas=none
Complexity=solo
Wordplay=solo
Vocabulary=solo

Overall=solo.

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man, i meant nokternal oon all of those. my bad. o man i'm sorry the voting system sa lil' confusuing my b my b

Voted For: Solo Creepin

Not the strongest battle, expected more from you Nock...

your first diss as a rapper how does it feel?
with a verse like that can this kid be real?
^^^
that was prolly the strongest point of ya battle, an that wasnt up ta much neither

it was too basic an not very creative, didnt flow well neither ta be honest nock, no hate homeboy, just trynna help...

Solo
this ya first battle an you could tell 4sho'...

The closer was blah, prolly the most creative line ya both had ta offer, wasnt feelin the line leadin up too the closer tho...

The slong idea was pretty nice for a new comer to the site, but again wasnt feelin the line leading up too the punch, you gotta make every line you say stand out, both of y'all...

But for creativty, an because it wasnt AS basic, Solo gets my vote

No hate y'all, just keep trynna step ya game up

Return the fave with a vote against Kustum image, thanks

Peace

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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

nockturnal......
This kid is "solo"(so low) he's creepin with himself
his rhymes stink so bad they're a hazard to our health
4/10

but he'll get dealt with , when i pelt him with celtic curses
cuz i'll jinx him who thinks he'll win with weak verses
3/10

your first diss as a rapper how does it feel?
with a verse like that can this kid be real?
2/10

i'll steal your win away and make you pay
today i'm gonna take your short rap career away
2/10

overall......11/40

Solo...............
ayo, when this battles dun... ima leave NoCkTerNuL
writting "Solo Creepin beat me" all up in hiz journal
2/10

he thinks he dope cuz he can spell anutha rappers name wrong
he bit hiz name, he bit hiz lyrics, he probly even bit hiz shlong
omg....1/10

so dont ask y he's sux at rap and he's always drinkin jiz
cuz tha real knoc explained it, its just "tha way he iz"
3/10

overall.....6/30


this was actually probably the worst battle ive ever read....but i felt sorry for you both so i decided to vote.....my vote goes to Nok for harder hitting punches...even though they really didnt hit hard at all.....that schlong line killed your verse Solo...Nok atleast tried to be a little bit creative with his verse....so thats why he gets this win......

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uppin this! we need more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

ight this was an average battle both of ya need 2 elevate in ur rhymes:
opener: noc punches: noc
vocab: noc personals: n/a
multis: n/a structure: noc
closer: noc
noc only won cuz he came harder & hit wit direct punches in this battle; solo u were all ova the place with ur rhymes
make sure 2 return the favor

uppin this ya'll vote up

uppin this battle

Vote up ya'll we need votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!