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Drama Queen | 5 | 83.33% | |
diman | 1 | 16.67% | |
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04-07-05, 03:46 PM | #1 |
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Drama Queen vs diman
IP: 5867 FD83
Topic: Drug of Gradualism
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04-07-05, 05:35 PM | #2 | |
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04-07-05, 05:39 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 5867 FD83
Drug of Gradualism had dreams of fathering a child, before i prepared for marraige. having been neglected, i vowed against all careless parents. promised id never embarrass...for my son, deserved better than slums. wantin the best for this one, prayin for healthy hearts & veteran lungs. cause medicine comes...easy, only for those who have steady jobs. why i gotta struggle for my child's existance, blasphemy God! dont ask me the cause...of my soul's conviction. its vanished. i want answers, why do i feel so hurt without actual physical damage? my heart wont quit its panic, damnit. i guess its true the good die young. cause the conent of my boy's heart was pure, so why remove my son? lemmie redo this month & warn wifey, drugs aint for the zealous. to drop her addiction & pay attention as her body developes. little did we know our newborn, would live less than a raindrop. & three years to the day he was born & died, i cant let the pain stop. i refuse to accept the loss & refuse to call my wife, for life is that fragile. (frag~ull) for everyday feels uncontrollable, like a canoe without a paddle. i lay drowned in tears, with such a thirst i drank my adam's apple. & have knowledge that simple existance, is now the hardest battle. my pulse trembles, slows gradual...my eyes shut & push out a tear. fell from my knees to face, in front of his grave & held the flowers dear.
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04-09-05, 06:38 AM | #4 | |
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04-09-05, 06:40 AM | #5 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: DDFB 95DD
Drug of Gradualism . . . Such a lovely innocent being, spoiled with tight hugs With a pure and naive soul, unaware how to fight drugs Ready to explore the world, tiny hands seeking around No obstacles yet, biggest challenge is the playground Who would've thought this child would soon be addicted Guided to be succesful yet his freedom gets restricted Learning to never take risks, living at a steady pace Slowly going forward one step at a time, just in case College awaits him, working day and night for that degree Strengthened by the hard struggle for an admission fee Locked up inside his room, focussed at a computer screen Alone with his wisdom, ancients books, cups of caffeine So gradually climbing up the ladder of life and love Safe and secure, excitement is what he fell short of . . . Tired eyes slowly closing, glass of whiskey in his hand Questioning a path chosen even though it went as planned Fought to reach this: nice house, cute kids, a good wife Doubts running through his mind:"is this really my life?" He once assumed taking things slow was the best way to go Became a workoholic but now it came to a sudden plateau They say he's too old to do his job how it should be done Ambition is gone for that inevitable demise of age begun Melancholic look on worn-out face covered with grey hair Worry present in his gestures, gently rocking in a chair Gradualism ruled his life, the next step has to be taken A final act awaits for this drug he has finally forsaken
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04-10-05, 04:13 PM | #6 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
uppin to the top.
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04-11-05, 02:43 PM | #7 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: C65B 17FC
Yup, what ^ said...
Uppity up up! People be sleepin' DQ
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04-12-05, 01:18 AM | #8 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
wow, 2 days... and still no votes
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04-14-05, 02:47 PM | #9 |
you dont know me
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IP: 8155 9B30
damn. is anyone liable for voting?
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04-14-05, 04:17 PM | #10 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: 7F2E 55A4
Come on people!!!!! Vote!!!!!! Pfffffffffffff
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04-17-05, 12:52 PM | #11 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: FE11 64E0
Come on, vote vote vote...upping once again...
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04-17-05, 01:05 PM | #12 | |
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: diman
okie dokie...this was a nice battle....sweet, soft topic that you both worked off...it was kinda hard to decide who to vote for though, but it came down to reading them again, and how many lines i stopped at and really had good meaning.....cause both had nice emotion, great imagery.....so, you made it really hard to decide DQ So gradually climbing up the ladder of life and love Safe and secure, excitement is what he fell short of Tired eyes slowly closing, glass of whiskey in his hand Questioning a path chosen even though it went as planned diman dont ask me the cause...of my soul's conviction. its vanished. i want answers, why do i feel so hurt without actual physical damage? my heart wont quit its panic, damnit. i guess its true the good die young. cause the conent of my boy's heart was pure, so why remove my son? i lay drowned in tears, with such a thirst i drank my adam's apple. & have knowledge that simple existance, is now the hardest battle. and thats basically how im doing this vote....these lines, i thought, really made an impact in both verses....and since diman had more that i pondered at.....im giving it to diman, but dont get me wrong DQ, you wrote an excellent verse, but i think diman edged it out ....keep up both v/diman
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04-19-05, 04:11 PM | #13 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: 3127 A61B
^Thanks for honest vote! Upping for some more!
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04-20-05, 03:04 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 8155 9B30
some one stop by and drop a quick vote....
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04-21-05, 12:50 PM | #15 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: EEBB 5B0F
Upping this once again...up up up up up up up...
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