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(jimmy pocketz) 5 55.56%
Typical 4 44.44%
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Old 06-18-05, 04:06 PM   #1
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Typical vs (jimmy pocketz)

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Old 06-18-05, 07:01 PM   #2
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Old 06-18-05, 07:03 PM   #3
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ayo
they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat
i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"
becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis
wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick
my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch
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Old 06-19-05, 09:40 PM   #4
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Old 06-19-05, 09:56 PM   #5
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Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical
Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss
Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt
Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs
Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez
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Old 06-20-05, 12:44 AM   #6
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Old 06-20-05, 05:29 PM   #7
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Old 06-20-05, 11:32 PM   #8
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ay this was a nice battle

Jimmy Pocketz - ive seen much better from you..ur opener was ok..not all the great but it was a cool personal..i think that was the only bar i liked..the mike tyson diss was weak..and ur closer wasnt that great.....6/10




Typical - good verse..ur opener kinda sucked but after that u did good..the parenthesis line was dope..i really liked that one..and the line about jimmy in his pocketz..very original and creative..good personal.....8/10




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Old 06-21-05, 12:15 AM   #9
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Old 06-22-05, 12:14 AM   #10
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Old 06-22-05, 12:41 AM   #11
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Explantion

Flow- Troop / And Also Id like to say that the structure was very neat to thanx

Punchez-[b] Troop He came way harder In all Ways Possible he really Did Take punchez by a long shot he came back to back with them so that made his verse more consistent and creative

[b]Personals-
Troop . LOL This is funny bcuz he hade some personals and I dint even see them at first until i read through it again so he gets that

Multies-[b] Typical Hade some small Maultie areas in his verse but no big biggy so he gets that area

[b]Vocab-
no big use of vocab in these bars ...
Origianlity- Troop He stuck to Tryin New punchez and new wordplay so that made his verse way more original Thand Typicals

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Old 06-22-05, 02:00 AM   #12
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Old 06-22-05, 02:02 PM   #13
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keep dreamin........................................
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Old 06-23-05, 02:01 PM   #14
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Old 06-23-05, 09:17 PM   #15
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Your vote was from a kid who votes against me in all battlez
cuz hes garbage
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