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View Poll Results: ~Lady Fiya~ vs Tweety | |||
~Lady Fiya~ | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-14-05, 11:59 AM | #1 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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~Lady Fiya~ vs Tweety
IP: ADBD 16C4
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20-30 Lines No Recycling No Biting No feeding (taking idea) fully explain votes no hate votes vote on all aspects (Imagery, emotion ect ect) Crew can vote (GW AND TE) Topic-Floating words MY FAULT! LOL Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 07-14-05 at 12:29 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
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07-14-05, 12:08 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: ADBD 16C4
Tweety has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 12:08 PM.
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07-14-05, 12:11 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
~Lady Fiya~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 12:11 PM.
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07-19-05, 12:06 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
“…Lean not towards your own understanding.” -Proverbs 3:5 Intro It’s not coincidental that sight and sound tend to match in basic symmetry The same sounds that make our ears tingle can open our eyes wide vividly The senses help guide in the straight path splitting those that are abnormal We feel things from the tips of our fingers and hear sounds of paranormal Floating Words You won’t meet her directly ’cause you won’t look for her like phone calls from friends out far, nor green lights for cars.. not even speech for the jaws they say she don’t exist, it’s a belief you seen it because of those with faith not the things you see and hear everyday from ringing bells, babies or trains.. but the disabled r able to wait and depend on her, to follow the hands to obey only at the end will you read this the right way, mute words she will convey she communicates disregarding class and culture, thoughts boiling into tests like the lips of Judas revealed Christ, weak judgment blossoms the blessed & to know someone so sensational can be aware with ears overtly immature she’s lured by lifelines in palms of this sincere companion, it’s quite secure... ...submitting her pure comprehension of verbs, subjects, n subordinate clauses common people only imitate, replace the translation using periods for pauses but we fall into complex traps, willing to convert back to her we attempting to fly we pivot back to what’s known, being ignorant we go on and on like clocks time our hands switch position like gestures, for one to understand we’ll exaggerate it Every word is in the eye of the beholder, writing insults her…Ms. Sign Language Good Luck, Tweety. 1
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07-19-05, 12:07 PM | #5 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 34CF 0C35
1st character He sits by him, feeling nervous, sweats pouring down hectic Plane takes off, force winds making his ear, hearing static He can only feel his heart beat pounding out of his chest Like without any holes in a box, he quickly holds his breath Like an road that's bumpy, the plane starts getting shaky Fear screams pouring out of passengers vocals, so screechy Body in a downward position, he whimpers as his body throb Holding onto his friend hand looking into his eyes sighting his sob Below of him, it starting to get wet, it's not the fear he pee in his pants It's the end of the roller-Coaster ride and we're sinking, where there’s no land 2nd character The water so cold, he starts to Tremble, but with heavy fear His Voice is Speechless dead corpse bodes lying everywhere Except him and his friend, Life-Jacket on their bruise arms Hid body Teeters, Lips quivers aint no way he can remain calm Holding onto his friend hand, they finally emerge out of the graveyard Sun Shining Above them, but it seems to him that keeping .................................................. ................His head up is so hard the EFFECT water slippery. The Cause losing grip onto his friend fingers He Tries to race up to the surface but it was to late. Deep down he lingers He sights his friend eyes in a desperate need, he gurgles trying to speak As He goes down, he see's his words in a bubble, evaporates into air .................................................. ..........................Out of the sea 1st Character He stood across from her face, tears Heavily pouring down from her pupil His heart melted out to her, seeing her tears, same as his friend like a sequel When he saw him go down, it was like seeing a rose doing the opposite of bloom Down, Down, he goes into a little seed, then death where there he'll rest .................................................. ..............For eternity but his soul will resume Now his tears Leak, Looking at his friend G/F stomach, a little baby is in there But the creator of the baby, Is like an ghost, but his soul remain, is not here Arms Wrap tightly around his friend G/F, Like an present giving his heart out to her He feels the pain in her heart, that's broken into pieces thrown into vigor It seems his eyes are incandescence, because their red, but it just the tears Flashing back on that Tragic day as he saw his own friend go down .................................................. .................Last Words he couldn’t hear
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-19-05, 12:11 PM | #6 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 34CF 0C35
Vote up................................................ .
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-19-05, 12:27 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
i forgot to put this (below) lol...
---The conflict in this topical is how people can Write and produce floating words (concrete)... vs. how people can use symbols to produce symmetrical floating words (abstract)--- Let's hope people can get it after they read it.. You had a nice topical by the way.. good luck, chica.
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07-19-05, 12:32 PM | #8 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 34CF 0C35
Booyago........................................... .....
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-19-05, 02:39 PM | #9 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 34CF 0C35
Booyago................................Uppin...... .............
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-20-05, 11:04 AM | #10 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: C789 02B6
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-20-05, 11:10 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
goodness people don't vote for nothing LOL...... uppin'!
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07-20-05, 01:03 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
wooo hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo
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07-20-05, 04:42 PM | #13 | ||||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 06A3 EFB1
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-20-05, 04:48 PM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
^none of that, missy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-21-05, 09:40 AM | #15 | ||||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: EA9D C0AC
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Not just a little?......I mean Touchie touchie
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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