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View Poll Results: Abash vs Souljah | |||
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Abash | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-06-05, 08:01 PM | #1 | |
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Abash vs Souljah
IP: A544 C9AB
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6 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No hate No d/r g'luck . Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 07-06-05 at 08:31 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Expired battle win |
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07-06-05, 08:02 PM | #2 | |
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IP: A544 C9AB
Abash has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 08:02 PM.
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07-06-05, 08:05 PM | #3 | |
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IP: A181 D033
Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 08:05 PM.
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07-06-05, 08:17 PM | #4 | |
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IP: A544 C9AB
this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared.
so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear! spitting sick words? nah. in this race you'll be placed 3rd. cuz souljah dont need broadband, to be band-width herbs! we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells. & even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!* * his name contains a "L" and L as in loss. . if you dont get the rest of the wordplay pm me or dont vote . |
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07-06-05, 08:23 PM | #5 |
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IP: A181 D033
Yo my nigga how you gonna figure that you're ill g,
Nigga think's he hard when homosexually he's guil-ty, With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself, Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf, * Lyrically i see your ass aint even gained a full license, Already you're a has-been gettin knocked out like tyson... *check his name - self exlanatory |
07-06-05, 08:47 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 452C 1869
Voted For: Abash
IP: Yo my nigga how you gonna figure that you're ill g, Nigga think's he hard when homosexually he's guil-ty, homosexual lines = , every homo concept is played cuz - 6/10 With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself, Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf, * you courd have whored this kid of his name bre, decent attempt at a personal nonetheless, gd flow - 7.5/10 Lyrically i see your ass aint even gained a full license, Already you're a has-been gettin knocked out like tyson... this was a weak ass closer fam, tyson linez :nono - 6/10 -up creativity -come original -use personals better -work on syllable counts -write 2 abeat this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared. so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear! gave me a chuckle, not too bad, g flow n set-up -7/10 spitting sick words? nah. in this race you'll be placed 3rd. cuz souljah dont need broadband, to be band-width herbs! wordplay is decent, dope flow to line, couldve have been wrded better but original and creative - 7.5/10 we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells. & even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!* this bar was weak, worded poorly and a shitty concept, it made me go -_-.....-7/10 -up personal use -better punches no hate to eitha of you...UK-AC
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07-07-05, 06:16 AM | #7 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
Ok uppin for more feedback............................
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07-16-05, 07:47 AM | #8 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
uppin this battle.................................
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07-17-05, 08:31 PM | #9 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
uppin this shit for real...................................
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07-31-05, 11:38 AM | #10 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
uppin this battle
can people please fuckin vote.................................. |
07-31-05, 01:26 PM | #11 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
Voted For: Abash
alrite, well abash, i aint seen anything by u b4 but this was a decent battle rite here. both ur verses flowed well, everything in both verses was self explanatory which is good. both verses lacked personals which are always good to see, but i havta give this one to abash cuz his verse was funny this bitch scrambling for war, yet he still unprepared. so i told him to bring the shit - dude showed w/ his underwear! ^^^humour's always a plus. we commenced war, and you getting smashed with shells. & even ur name shows, you cant be complete without the L!* ^^^ the set up line here was wack but the finisher was good, a good attempt at nameplay. soulja, i've seen u come a lot harder than this, i think u werent expectin much from abash. The only bar i thought was good is With split personlities he couldn't beg props from himself, Cos the only time you hard is when you Bashin to the top shelf ^^that was good but one bar wont win it 4 u. the homosexual and tyson punches r so way beyond played! but no hate to either i just think abash got it this time.
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07-31-05, 06:42 PM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for Souljah
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