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Old 04-30-06, 08:40 AM   #1
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Old 04-30-06, 02:52 PM   #2
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Old 04-30-06, 03:16 PM   #3
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Old 05-03-06, 03:07 PM   #4
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Take that fuckin' Belt off...

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LBL Championship Match: 1. Mimesis (5-0) vs 2. So Rell (4-0)

Will be a nice battle. But I don’t think Rell has what it takes to beat Mimesis. Mimesis has been on the text battling scene for a while now where as Rell hasn’t. And that experience has obviously made Mimesis better now than Rell is at the moment. I Rell is nice but I just can’t see him winning this, he’d have to really pull something out his ass to win. So Mimesis to take this pretty comprehensively.

Dick Riders worship you. But when you lose voters won't think it's staged.
I even got Kempo Doubtin' me, but HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK MIM WAS MADE?
Can you be serious, or delirious, I mean Damn this Joke.
Champ is just not Cut Out for you even if you dropped Ransom Notes.
Me lose they expect it right, 'cause He's the champ, damn he's set for life.
But his Writer's Block must be ambidextrous, cause he's got nuffin Left to Write.
He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.
The high pitch screeching, and explosion, I know you heard it man.
It was just that Car Wreck of a verse lucky I Ensured the win.
Ya'll have been suckered in to his skill well this bitch is over.
Your wordplay was so damn Forced, It's using Jedi Mind Tricks on Voters.
One played punch after another, and I'm just sittin' through.
Your drops are full of Setups that look like they Snitched on you.
You got a Clef that if I give you a Chin Check It might Strike Back.
I'ma stop with the pic jokes, cause I'm afraid my kids might end up like that.
Ya Girl is fat as fuck and your homo, that's been you right?
Dinner comes she orders 4 sides plus all the Menu like.
I knocked all opponents Lights Out, But yours are crap.
I had to pay an Electrician to turn them on Before the match.

Bitch ASS Nigga!
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Old 05-04-06, 07:37 PM   #5
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When Kemp said pull something out of your ass. . I don't think he meant shit.

Force, Ensure, Lights Out, Gif. .what the fuck?

You must be lost. . this is the champ match. .

Your whole verse was played as hell. . just drop that rhyme, jerk
You'd need gravity, friction AND movement to make that force line work
It went out months ago. . it'll be no joke when I start harmin' the Rell
We just made eye contact and your whole fucking face started to swell
Me, Myself, And I?. . your title shows you know how it sounds to be rattled
Though that may be a cool movie. .
. .it also means I'm going to Carey your body out of this battle
Gettin knocked out. . what were you thinkin posting that booed verse?
Cause when I say So ill. . it's just because I'm requesting some new shirts
You stepped for a rippin. . so it's only fair I keep breakin your spine cold
Cause I'm about to drop a # 2 faster than nervous kids taking their finals
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make
My punches'll keep owning your face. . just give me something to rip
Figuring out your level of talent isn't easy. . but there's still nothing to it
20 lines has been more than enough. . I've already just owned this coward
So here goes nothing. . ahh, wait. .
. .you've had your verse posted for hours

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You got a Clef that if I give you a Chin Check It might Strike Back.
I'ma stop with the pic jokes, cause I'm afraid my kids might end up like that.


That was some tight shit. . though I still gotta keep breaking your raps
But you SHOULD start worrying. .
. .cause even you know you're getting raped in this match
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Old 05-04-06, 09:43 PM   #6
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Old 05-04-06, 10:36 PM   #7
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wtf.. roflflflfl. daed, ur a jerk.. what ever though. i'm breakin this one down.

Dick Riders worship you. But when you lose voters won't think it's staged.
I even got Kempo Doubtin' me, but HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK MIM WAS MADE?
..naw. this was a decent concept, but it wasn't that effective. should've been worded better..
Can you be serious, or delirious, I mean Damn this Joke.
Champ is just not Cut Out for you even if you dropped Ransom Notes.
..this was nice. could've hit harder, but good concept..
Me lose they expect it right, 'cause He's the champ, damn he's set for life.
But his Writer's Block must be ambidextrous, cause he's got nuffin Left to Write.
..dope. another good concept and effective. nice..
He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.
..hmm.. aiight. not really feelin it, but its aiight, i guess.. =/
The high pitch screeching, and explosion, I know you heard it man.
It was just that Car Wreck of a verse lucky I Ensured the win.
..no! this is mad play'd, yo. just lose shit like this..
Ya'll have been suckered in to his skill well this bitch is over.
Your wordplay was so damn Forced, It's using Jedi Mind Tricks on Voters.
..lol, its funny cause u used this in a champ match, eww..
One played punch after another, and I'm just sittin' through.
Your drops are full of Setups that look like they Snitched on you.
..lol, that was ILL. i liked that one, yo..
You got a Clef that if I give you a Chin Check It might Strike Back.
I'ma stop with the pic jokes, cause I'm afraid my kids might end up like that.
..dohpe! this was really good. keep up shit like this..
Ya Girl is fat as fuck and your homo, that's been you right?
Dinner comes she orders 4 sides plus all the Menu like.
..um, naw. not feelin this @ all..
I knocked all opponents Lights Out, But yours are crap.
I had to pay an Electrician to turn them on Before the match.
..this was ok. i know its been used before, but u flip'd ok..

vs.

Your whole verse was played as hell. . just drop that rhyme, jerk
You'd need gravity, friction AND movement to make that force line work
..lmao, that was so fed, but it was funny as hell and dope..
It went out months ago. . it'll be no joke when I start harmin' the Rell
We just made eye contact and your whole fucking face started to swell
..lol, cool..
Me, Myself, And I?. . your title shows you know how it sounds to be rattled
Though that may be a cool movie. .
. .it also means I'm going to Carey your body out of this battle
..nice, this was ILL and witty..
Gettin knocked out. . what were you thinkin posting that booed verse?
Cause when I say So ill. . it's just because I'm requesting some new shirts
..meh. not really feelin this..
You stepped for a rippin. . so it's only fair I keep breakin your spine cold
Cause I'm about to drop a # 2 faster than nervous kids taking their finals
..nice, good and nother witty concept, effective to..
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with
..roflflflfl.. this was ILL..
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make
..lol, this was ok but not really feeling it too to much..
My punches'll keep owning your face. . just give me something to rip
Figuring out your level of talent isn't easy. . but there's still nothing to it
..this was good. i liked it cause of the cliche, simple and effective..
20 lines has been more than enough. . I've already just owned this coward
So here goes nothing. . ahh, wait. .
. .you've had your verse posted for hours
..ahh! this was straiight but this wasn't really a punch..
That was some tight shit. . though I still gotta keep breaking your raps
But you SHOULD start worrying. .
. .cause even you know you're getting raped in this match
..good closer cause of the ego and confidence and the fact that its pretty evident u won..

ok, this was a good battle but easily one sided. rell, you had some good and witty lines, but they were lackin that "punch"! they could've been wayy harder and worded a bit better. some of the concepts you had as well were really weak to, but u did have some good ones. just not enough to win this, imo. but mimesis, this was a good verse. good and hard punches. witty/fresh as hell. overall better verse. good solid punches and nothing to weak or weak enough to hurt you. this is an honest vote people, i'm choosin favors either. good job to both and g/l with future battles. but..

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Old 05-04-06, 11:31 PM   #8
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wtf.. roflflflfl. daed, ur a jerk..


Lmao. See, I'm like to everybody. . it wasn't just when I battled you.

Thanks for the detailed vote, though. 'Preciate it.
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Old 05-04-06, 11:44 PM   #9
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naw man.. ur just an A-HOLE!

lmao, but it's all in fun. good drop and peeps, leave good feed..
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Old 05-05-06, 02:14 PM   #10
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Rell..
Me lose they expect it right, 'cause He's the champ, damn he's set for life.
But his Writer's Block must be ambidextrous, cause he's got nuffin Left to Write.
He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.
One played punch after another, and I'm just sittin' through.
Your drops are full of Setups that look like they Snitched on you.
Ya Girl is fat as fuck and your homo, that's been you right?
Dinner comes she orders 4 sides plus all the Menu like.

vs..

Mimesis..
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make
20 lines has been more than enough. . I've already just owned this coward
So here goes nothing. . ahh, wait. .
. .you've had your verse posted for hours

vote - rell

..mim, ya first bar wuz kinda sick, but, you did something that every vet i know considers FEEDINNGGG..i mean i kno you get a punishment of "one vote" and all, but feeding is really gay, regardless of if you think ya opponents lines are old or not..it honestly hurt you, because a line thats feeding is never a quotable IMO..
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Old 05-05-06, 02:32 PM   #11
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v/ Mim

really... this wasnt even close

He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.

thats all i saw from Rell that was decent and not played (the force and menu lines were horrid)

You stepped for a rippin. . so it's only fair I keep breakin your spine cold
Cause I'm about to drop a # 2 faster than nervous kids taking their finals
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with

the rest was decent from Mim
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Old 05-05-06, 03:17 PM   #12
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this was dope rell..

Dick Riders worship you. But when you lose voters won't think it's staged.
I even got Kempo Doubtin' me, but HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK MIM WAS MADE?
cool
Can you be serious, or delirious, I mean Damn this Joke.
Champ is just not Cut Out for you even if you dropped Ransom Notes.
ok cool
Me lose they expect it right, 'cause He's the champ, damn he's set for life.
But his Writer's Block must be ambidextrous, cause he's got nuffin Left to Write.
ive heard stuff like this before so played, i like it thou
He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.
dope
The high pitch screeching, and explosion, I know you heard it man.
It was just that Car Wreck of a verse lucky I Ensured the win.
nice
Ya'll have been suckered in to his skill well this bitch is over.
Your wordplay was so damn Forced, It's using Jedi Mind Tricks on Voters.
cool
One played punch after another, and I'm just sittin' through.
Your drops are full of Setups that look like they Snitched on you.
dope
You got a Clef that if I give you a Chin Check It might Strike Back.
I'ma stop with the pic jokes, cause I'm afraid my kids might end up like that.
hha nice
Ya Girl is fat as fuck and your homo, that's been you right?
Dinner comes she orders 4 sides plus all the Menu like.
nice
I knocked all opponents Lights Out, But yours are crap.
I had to pay an Electrician to turn them on Before the match.
ehhh


Your whole verse was played as hell. . just drop that rhyme, jerk
You'd need gravity, friction AND movement to make that force line work
dope
It went out months ago. . it'll be no joke when I start harmin' the Rell
We just made eye contact and your whole fucking face started to swell
cool
Me, Myself, And I?. . your title shows you know how it sounds to be rattled
Though that may be a cool movie. .
. .it also means I'm going to Carey your body out of this battle
nice
Gettin knocked out. . what were you thinkin posting that booed verse?
Cause when I say So ill. . it's just because I'm requesting some new shirts
ehh
You stepped for a rippin. . so it's only fair I keep breakin your spine cold
Cause I'm about to drop a # 2 faster than nervous kids taking their finals
ok
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with
dope
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make
thats not how you pronounce gaea
My punches'll keep owning your face. . just give me something to rip
Figuring out your level of talent isn't easy. . but there's still nothing to it
nice
20 lines has been more than enough. . I've already just owned this coward
So here goes nothing. . ahh, wait. .
. .you've had your verse posted for hours
ok
That was some tight shit. . though I still gotta keep breaking your raps
But you SHOULD start worrying. .
. .cause even you know you're getting raped in this match
dope

vote:mim...dope battle, rell u shouldnt of posted so early..both had dope verses but mims punches were fresher...was hopin the underdog would win but oh well
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Old 05-05-06, 03:19 PM   #13
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Who is Slay-Eddie? Is he even in this league?

Thanks for the votes, though. 'Preciate it.
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Old 05-05-06, 03:44 PM   #14
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Damn I just read this, Wow you fed my whole verse Jesus Christ...Dope drop, but you basically ate my post. Lol hot drop, yea Eddie is in the League...Neway Up more votes
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Old 05-05-06, 04:34 PM   #15
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He fed 2 lines. 2 votes deducted.

Voting stands at 1-1.
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