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Old 04-30-06, 08:40 AM   #1
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5. Precize (2-1) vs 6. Rush Lingo (3-2)

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Old 04-30-06, 11:54 AM   #3
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yeah kid

how many? 12?
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Old 04-30-06, 01:37 PM   #4
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yea lets go 12......
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Old 04-30-06, 06:31 PM   #5
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wanna drop tonight?? if u aint got time thats aigh..
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Old 04-30-06, 06:36 PM   #6
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yeah, sure, i'll try to put some shit down and follow you up.
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Old 04-30-06, 08:06 PM   #7
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won't stop with the killin, roofs on fire and im hot as the ceilin..
..So jus take my style and run with it..off the top of a buildin..
fuck weakLing, everyones showin up to see this geek pinned..
..boring, this battles more of a Drag then him on the weekends..
listen to what i speak friend, while ya watch this freak plummet..
..rush aint grimey and this dudes not Gutter..he jus drinks from it..
skills at the highest peak im above the skys, rush loves the guys..
..won't pass with flying colors..he'll see um infront of his eyes..
stab you with broken sword handles, namein off ways im beating you..
..ive had it..this is the last straw..the same one he'll be eating through..
your verses are Ass..givin new meaning to Bum Rush, fagget..
...last time he grabbed life by the balls, he tryed to teabag it..

dropped early cuz iono if ima be on this week...g/l rush

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Old 04-30-06, 08:52 PM   #8
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look.

yo, yo.

you posted a verse in the league, and tried boostin yaself
and none of it truly is felt,
so carribeans ain't the reason that jamaican a fool of yaself
i'ma put this dude on the shelf, his girls usually givin it up
she's got a dimpled chin, but its really a dent from my nuts
my attack is raw. although i never touch men while their down
so when you're knocked out, you'll still get kicked in the mouth
ease back, ya weak and it showed, no ones appalled no more
ya verses remind me of train attendants because all a’ bored
at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue
i got ya bitches ass clappin duke, she know i’ma shatter it raw
i told her we gone fuck not to worry, cuz Cize don’t matter at all

goodluck to you too holmes.
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Old 04-30-06, 09:05 PM   #9
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your verses are Ass..givin new meaning to Bum Rush, fagget..
...last time he grabbed life by the balls, he tryed to teabag it..

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you posted a verse in the league, and tried boostin yaself
and none of it truly is felt,
so carribeans ain't the reason that jamaican a fool of yaself
at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue

Eh......

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Old 05-01-06, 02:28 PM   #10
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at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue

vs

nothing really

ALOT of played stuff here... a jamaican line, run with it, all aboard, drag...


c'mon guys... you can do better

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Old 05-03-06, 10:51 AM   #11
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listen to what i speak friend, while ya watch this freak plummet..
..rush aint grimey and this dudes not Gutter..he jus drinks from it..
stab you with broken sword handles, namein off ways im beating you..
..ive had it..this is the last straw..the same one he'll be eating through..
your verses are Ass..givin new meaning to Bum Rush, fagget..
...last time he grabbed life by the balls, he tryed to teabag it..

vs.

i'ma put this dude on the shelf, his girls usually givin it up
she's got a dimpled chin, but its really a dent from my nuts
at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue

not a bad battle. but precize, i'm gettin the insentive that you have prewritten verses dude. like, get more personal. also, come with more fresh/witty concepts. 'n try to make them worded better so that they hit harder. rush, your shit was mad play'd. liked two lines in that verse and the personals, dude.. could've been so much more effective. work on wordin, but i must say.. the "nuts on her chin" lines was gold. honestly, my favorite punch of the battle.

v/ precize for more consistency.
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Old 05-03-06, 11:40 AM   #12
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n't stop with the killin, roofs on fire and im hot as the ceilin..
..So jus take my style and run with it..off the top of a buildin..
fuck weakLing, everyones showin up to see this geek pinned..
..boring, this battles more of a Drag then him on the weekends..
listen to what i speak friend, while ya watch this freak plummet..
..rush aint grimey and this dudes not Gutter..he jus drinks from it..

VS.

at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue


Wow, I guess I have a difference of opinion to everyone else. I felt that Precize came decent at the start and sort of fell off towards the end. I liked his 3 opening bars, they made me laugh... the rest of the verse was consistent to the point that he never went totally wack. Rush on the other hand dropped a weak verse, the concepts he uses for his punches are too played.. I mean a Jamaican line, that shit has been done no end of times, and that Cize nameplay - wasn't that like used on Precize last week or something. I know I've seen it before. Anyway, overall Precize was more consistent and had more quotables so I have him taking this battle.

V/ - Precize
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Old 05-03-06, 04:35 PM   #13
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listen to what i speak friend, while ya watch this freak plummet..
..rush aint grimey and this dudes not Gutter..he jus drinks from it..
skills at the highest peak im above the skys, rush loves the guys..
..won't pass with flying colors..he'll see um infront of his eyes..
stab you with broken sword handles, namein off ways im beating you..
..ive had it..this is the last straw..the same one he'll be eating through..

vs.

my attack is raw. although i never touch men while their down
so when you're knocked out, you'll still get kicked in the mouth
at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue

I say Precize took this one for being more creative, Rush your wordplay was pretty forced and some played. I know you can drop better this was just mediocre, I like the Kick Push line Dope. But you didn't have enuff to take it.

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Old 05-03-06, 04:41 PM   #14
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it's my style.

i don't want to switch styles just so i can get votes.

my idea of a sell out to myself.

thanks for the votes guys.
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Old 05-03-06, 05:39 PM   #15
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it's my style.

i don't want to switch styles just so i can get votes.

my idea of a sell out to myself.

thanks for the votes guys.

wtf??? no! no ones sayin to change ur style, and its not sellin out.
all i was tryin to say, elevate yo. theres nothin bout sellin out when ur just improvin urself.

i was sayin ur good, but u could be ALOT better. i'm just wantin some good competition and i see it, but i feel alot of good heads could be better text heads, nawmeans?

good job anyway.
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