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Old 05-21-06, 02:31 PM   #1
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31. Da Sein (0-0) vs 32. Tim (0-0)

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Old 05-21-06, 11:07 PM   #2
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well ..........
blah just match me man.
ima drop first anyway's. so....
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Old 05-22-06, 04:50 PM   #3
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Old 05-23-06, 02:44 AM   #4
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Old 05-23-06, 06:18 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by Tim.
ima drop first anyway's. so....


^ saw that and had to key sometin...

...ur trash


Know why you’ll lose and be showered with pain T…?
It’s my first week in the league…Kempo already power ranked me
I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid
I bash fags to death and Tim’ll hop on dicks any sec.
So his butt is more recessed than a Parliament cigarette
Ignorant fool…I wreck lungs with slugs dude
You got it twisted in your user title, Perfections above you
You’ve only battled one time too…I’ll leave ya mind bruised
True, my set ups have no punches but…NONE of your lines do
I was poor, used to care for boots...those times were grim-n-blue
But now I’m loaded so…I don’t mind fucking up a Tim or two
heres a three liner to punch this bitch done dead
I dropped weak cuz i doubt you...
...like EVERYONE in the prediction thread


WOOF

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Old 05-24-06, 04:59 AM   #6
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Trynna spit?..BLAH...You Must Be Starvin To Lose
I Pardon This Fool U A Hoe And Not The Gardening Tool
R.I.P's passed out like im "Ownning your hearts" wen im wrestling
I'm "TOO SICK" for ya so, to "GET WELL SOON" is 'Outta-The-Question
and jesus aint curing him, he aint no motherFuckin lazarus
this mother Fuckerc hazardous........
...........................................lightin g fagots up like cancer sticks..
you could rap faster than twista, sniffin some coke
that shit just means no body heard a single word that you spoke
ya words is a joke, shits not even deservin' some quotes
you as fucked up as a Bitch who won't let a dick touch her throat
ya fake couldn’t figure me out like the name rumplestillskin
My flow's "Roll" Straight to the "Point".....
.................................................. .......Like different color pens
So here's MY 3 liner punch to show you down
and also on how my sick flow
.....Catches ya lookin and knocks out in the first ROUND!

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if ya dont get the punches man dont vote.
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Old 05-24-06, 09:53 AM   #7
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kind of a halfassed battle. I wasnt very impressed with Tim, Da Sein tho is way better than he used to be. Structure line was pretty cool. Props to that.

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Old 05-24-06, 07:33 PM   #8
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I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid

vs

nothing


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Old 05-25-06, 01:28 PM   #9
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seins improved alot, his flow was dope throughout but he had a few lines that jus took it pretty easy, the card line was sik probbaly the best line. tim didnt have anything to be honest, some lame wordplay... whats up with the .........................................'s. and too many weak lines

yeah so sein took it easy for me, with acouple of dope lines
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Old 05-25-06, 01:38 PM   #10
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I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid
You’ve only battled one time too…I’ll leave ya mind bruised
True, my set ups have no punches but…NONE of your lines do

vs

Trynna spit?..BLAH...You Must Be Starvin To Lose
I Pardon This Fool U A Hoe And Not The Gardening Tool


tim you have potential but you need to work on your punches , some are kinda out dated, the sein didnt own this battle so you couldve won with a stronger effort

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Old 05-25-06, 03:06 PM   #11
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I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid
vs.
nothing
but that hoe line had good structure and wording but wasn't a good.

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that card line was pretty weak too, but ya vote
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Old 05-25-06, 03:30 PM   #12
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I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid
You’ve only battled one time too…I’ll leave ya mind bruised
True, my set ups have no punches but…NONE of your lines do
heres a three liner to punch this bitch done dead
I dropped weak cuz i doubt you...
...like EVERYONE in the prediction thread

vs.


you could rap faster than twista, sniffin some coke
that shit just means no body heard a single word that you spoke



ya, sein got this easy. he didnt drop anything that was really amazing, but had a couple nice personals, structure line was only ok but it hit. Tim used that hoe line and the whole get well soon shit, gotta update your concepts my man, no offense of course. but yea, sein got this.

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Old 05-25-06, 03:55 PM   #13
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You’ve only battled one time too…I’ll leave ya mind bruised
True, my set ups have no punches but…NONE of your lines do

Vs.

Nothing really

sein got this pretty easy, even thought his verse was not tha greatest, all tha lines were ok... Tim just didnt have much goin on, wasnt feelin most of the punches, nothin felt too clever or hard hittin... much respect to both emcees

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Old 05-25-06, 04:20 PM   #14
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I’d say stick to topicals but ya piece I peeped was garbage
Bitch, I’ve seen stronger structure in a house of cards kid
I bash fags to death and Tim’ll hop on dicks any sec.
So his butt is more recessed than a Parliament cigarette

Vs

Nuthin

V/da sein this was one sided sein had acouple of good quotables..tim you came wit a weak verse nuthin really quotable
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Old 05-25-06, 06:55 PM   #15
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You’ve only battled one time too…I’ll leave ya mind bruised
True, my set ups have no punches but…NONE of your lines do

VS.

NOTHING.


Fuck, after Kemp saying Da Sein was decent, I was expecting better. I know it was only a half-ass verse though. He still won with the only bar in the battle that I felt was worth quoting. Don't take it to heart though. Sein's verse was consistent, worth reading but nothing popped out at me and made me think "DOPE" apart from that one bar. As for TIM, you have potential.... update your concepts, or try and re-word them and flip them better. Also, stop with all the ............ and """" shit... that is hella newbish and gay.


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