wtf lol

im battling u twice

w.e

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228548
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228554
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228557
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=228544&page=2

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check...Im not sure wat da hell u talking bout but I'll probably find out sooner or later. so let do this....good luck

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U like a thread no one opens....dawg....u dead fuss....
I'll grab glock and squeeze that nigga till his fucking head bust...
and I put the food on the plate...dont bite the hand that feeds u...
Im only fattening u up so…. niggas besides me could eat u....
and u wak...bitch...I can tell by ur fucking av....
u quote niggaz that would merk u...and put ur verse in a doggy bag...
cuz kempo said "spit no limit"....like Master P....
but u beating Raw....that’s like Jesus himself committing blasphemy....
u need to switch ur style like confused transvestites...
they matched us up like this....so u could feed off me and taste wat the best like...
cuz u need to stop on the spot...U beating the king would be colossal...
but its just fiction...like Christ having a female apostle....
u aint shit but a lil rascal wit a mic...u need to grow up....
I'll beat u down till u throw up...like an ugly chick in the club...u shouldn't have even showed up......

If u don’t understand something just let me know so I could explain more…believe me…there’s punch in every line.

Good luck to my opponent on this one…lets make this shit entertaining dawg.

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hay roger...its kewl to drop ur shit early now so we could it over wit since I already spit my shit u dont have to worry about me feeding...I dont really get down like that. uppin for ur verse nigga.

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^chill out. your itching to lose that bad?

relax! your gonna get slapped up cuz your the worst
no lie, when I seen King....my heart was beating, your verse
I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
I read your verse and scratched my head, wtf were you trying man
your punches looked like boats in the bermuda triangle...did they land?
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week
dont try to sneak up OR you'll catch Roger with your mother doggie
....ya, you 'Pop-a Glock'..cuz thats what I told you you call me
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out
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FUCK THIS IM GOING RAW!!!!!! I was about to quit cuz I already won dude
^^ but last time I said that out loud...guess what happen? I had you


blah.

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Raw King
NOTHING.

Don't get me wrong, you had punches... just no good ones. That style you use is just shit for text, it works better on audio. So, I'm guessing that you're an audio head. All the punches you threw were like some shit from '04 that I used to see newbies dropping. I mean, the shit may sound good lyrically on a track to a decent beat... but reading it as a text verse it just comes across as wack.

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Roger Glocks
I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out

and...
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week

Right. I had to quote ^^ that bar... it was basic yes but it had my name mentioned so its automatic dopeness, lol. Anyway, those two other bars I quoted were dope as hell, I laughed my ass off at both of them. The rest of the verse was pretty decent, kept at a consistent level... just nothing overly dope that made me want to quote it. Anyway, Roger Glocks fucking demolished Raw in this battle with a much better verse.

V/ - Roger Glocks

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I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back


that shit took the battle
ill break it down more if wanted

but raw kings shit is good for audio like nick said
Like it would SOUND good
text is a different animal, your concepts have to be tighter cuz we're reading it not hearing it

Roger didnt come with much i liked text wise
but that far fetched shit made me laugh out loud
only bar in the battle to make me do so

v/ roger

k...good looking out....I dont really think my verse was that bad but I see wat ur saying...0-2 so far...thanks for putting down...

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nah, i liked your verse
flowise it was on point, i could picture you spitting that in front of cats and they head bopping, but text rhymes like that come across as simple, most cats look for creative concepts, roger like i said only had that dog line, but thats a good example of a text punchline as opposed to an audio punchline
just come back next week and slay someone, throw some wordplay and personals in there, you'll be fine

and I put the food on the plate...dont bite the hand that feeds u...
Im only fattening u up so…. niggas besides me could eat u....
u need to switch ur style like confused transvestites...
they matched us up like this....so u could feed off me and taste wat the best like...
those two lines were aight, the rest were disses, but they didn't have alot of complex shit, they were easy to understand which is good if you're spitting it live, but in text it's better to have something that takes more thought to get


vs.

I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out
FUCK THIS IM GOING RAW!!!!!! I was about to quit cuz I already won dude
^^ but last time I said that out loud...guess what happen? I had you
yea, you took this, far fetched was nice. nick line was solid. wack'd out was pretty good. last line wasn't quite up there, but it was solid.


vote- glocks, ok battle, he took it easy. keep writing raw.

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U like a thread no one opens....dawg....u dead fuss....
I'll grab glock and squeeze that nigga till his fucking head bust...
and I put the food on the plate...dont bite the hand that feeds u...
Im only fattening u up so…. niggas besides me could eat u....
and u wak...bitch...I can tell by ur fucking av....
u quote niggaz that would merk u...and put ur verse in a doggy bag...
cuz kempo said "spit no limit"....like Master P....
but u beating Raw....that’s like Jesus himself committing blasphemy....
u need to switch ur style like confused transvestites...
they matched us up like this....so u could feed off me and taste wat the best like...
cuz u need to stop on the spot...U beating the king would be colossal...
but its just fiction...like Christ having a female apostle....
u aint shit but a lil rascal wit a mic...u need to grow up....
I'll beat u down till u throw up...like an ugly chick in the club...u shouldn't have even showed up......
This was a nice drop wasnt spitacular but was a good drop. The creativity and punch delivery wasnt all that though i think you like some heavy punch areas and some of your punches fell a lil short. though your multies is allright. im not sayin you didnt have any punches im just saying it didnt really connect well!.




relax! your gonna get slapped up cuz your the worst
no lie, when I seen King....my heart was beating, your verse
I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
I read your verse and scratched my head, wtf were you trying man
your punches looked like boats in the bermuda triangle...did they land?
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week
dont try to sneak up OR you'll catch Roger with your mother doggie
....ya, you 'Pop-a Glock'..cuz thats what I told you you call me
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out
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.
.
.
.
.
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FUCK THIS IM GOING RAW!!!!!! I was about to quit cuz I already won dude
^^ but last time I said that out loud...guess what happen? I had you
This was a good drop. real punch hitter. He got you in mostly all areas RAW...he just str8 found some shit on you, Dug deep and brought it up and started throwing it str8 in ur face homes. Punches and choice of wording was well executed. excellent multie action!.


v// Roger

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and I put the food on the plate...dont bite the hand that feeds u...
Im only fattening u up so…. niggas besides me could eat u....
HAHA
u need to switch ur style like confused transvestites...
they matched us up like this....so u could feed off me and taste wat the best like...
COOL, BUT STRETCHED

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I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
DOPESAUCE
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out

Roger basically had this with the far fetched line, way better than raw's best punches...
i dunno nothing really impressed me...

yea...keep writing RAW, you'll get there

v-Glocks

Most of Raw's punches werent even punches, it was kinda strange in all honesty. Rog came with his typical self, off and on - enough to win tho for sure.

Best line was the far fetched

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