cool, 12 or 14.

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Check......14 kid goodluck..

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

John Hensley

Ughhh. you callin me kid? you gotta be dumb dude.
The imposters of my imposters imposters could probably son you.

^^cool shit
I read your last battle, i dunno how you could be nice.
Haha, i mean, you got shut out 10-0 by some dude i've beat twice.

^^is that mets? lol nice

When i first read that i thought the shit was so fake.
I wondered how ya knew it..
... then realized your gay ass was jackin off to it on video tape.

^^lol ok good line personal

I can do the fam disses too, see i made your sister my lover.
Yea i put down an early flow.. unlike when i hit that bitch with no rubber.

^^decent not feeling this compared to the other lines

See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get.

^^lol haha fav line so far

I can do the name disses cuz i'm better in this game.
You're nothin, it'll be a W I C like the first three letters in your name.

^^cool nameplay

Listen you fagot, i don't like gunplay but this is too drastic.
Once i balance the beam on your head it'll make you flip like gymnastics.

^^str8 blow here

I'm dissin' this cats shit...<-- and trust that my flows above it.
Now you're in need of safety.. like a corner that's blown his coverage.

^^err decent

It's too easy for you to get behind when i diss ya rhymes.
I'm about ta turn ya verse upside down...
.. but hey, at least you can claim John Hensley flipped your lines.

^^LMAO dopeeeee

cool verse...the personals were cool and wording was nice

Wicked One



Yo, i've never been hated on so much, its like a love crush...
This kid finally made it out closet just to hang on my nuts...

^^ok way to start

Peace don't need heat, these keys errupt to blow your brain up...
I'm runnin off pennzoil maximum, son your flow needs to change up...

^^aight cool sick flow tho

Multiply the word suck, then add it to ya repitore, you dumb fuck...
Wicked's known to run a muck, met the best w/ an uppercut...

^^hmm...no real punch here man

My speech was tested by the fuz, so ill, it gave out an alias...
Pulled off in a rush, found ya pussy style and went murderous...

^^err i mean alias murderous and the punch wasn't there

This is showtime, i flow rhymes, and there's no signs that you know crime...
The only law you breaking is the gravity kind, holdin ya head up after readin these lines...

^^aight this was cool...but the ''holding ya head'' was not needed

Punks jump up to get beat down & the track plays in the back of my mind...
Ha reminds me of shine i spit, recline this bitch and then define this shit as mouthnificent...

^^ok i dunno where this was going

This fag gets passed around in prison cliques, known for being the prison bitch...
Even signing autographs after releasing his manuscripts, entitled "the struggle of wearing the prison's tits"...


^^lol ok i dunno what this meant and whats going with this shit lol ...


ok first of all ..wicked one i like your flows and multi's... this would be a hott audio track..but this is a text battle...and you didn't diss hensley at all...i mean focus on your opponent and stop showing off your multi..you got talent tho dawg..juss gotta zero in a opponent ..you got talent for writting period...but...this wasn't close this time around

vote-hensley

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When i first read that i thought the shit was so fake.
I wondered how ya knew it..
... then realized your gay ass was jackin off to it on video tape
It's too easy for you to get behind when i diss ya rhymes.
I'm about ta turn ya verse upside down...
.. but hey, at least you can claim John Hensley flipped your lines.


digged those two bars, not really up to par with your other stuff though
and the nameplays were blah to me, but still were ALL disses to him

which is why wicked lost in my op
wick has nice flow, multi's i love multis but you gotta tie a punch in with them, and the punch has to be a diss to your opponant
you can def write, like the above voter said
just gotta form personals and punches out your flow and multis

v/ hens

See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get.
I'm dissin' this cats shit...<-- and trust that my flows above it.
Now you're in need of safety.. like a corner that's blown his coverage.
^^decent nameplay, but im diggin ya safety line, witty as shit.
vs.
nothing
wick didn't have one bit of wording for a punch or good wordplay

vote- hens

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When i first read that i thought the shit was so fake.
I wondered how ya knew it..
... then realized your gay ass was jackin off to it on video tape.
Listen you fagot, i don't like gunplay but this is too drastic.
Once i balance the beam on your head it'll make you flip like gymnastics.
It's too easy for you to get behind when i diss ya rhymes.
I'm about ta turn ya verse upside down...
.. but hey, at least you can claim John Hensley flipped your lines.

vs

Yo, i've never been hated on so much, its like a love crush...
This kid finally made it out closet just to hang on my nuts...
This is showtime, i flow rhymes, and there's no signs that you know crime...
The only law you breaking is the gravity kind, holdin ya head up after readin these lines...


v/hens

wicked one has a real ill flow...actually better than hensley

it would work better in audio battles

also, he had some filler lines that didnt really hit

hens came sub par but it was enough

good job both sides

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228544
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228548
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228546

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When i first read that i thought the shit was so fake.
I wondered how ya knew it..
... then realized your gay ass was jackin off to it on video tape.
I can do the fam disses too, see i made your sister my lover.
Yea i put down an early flow.. unlike when i hit that bitch with no rubber.
See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get.
I can do the name disses cuz i'm better in this game.
You're nothin, it'll be a W I C like the first three letters in your name.

Vs

Yo, i've never been hated on so much, its like a love crush...
This kid finally made it out closet just to hang on my nuts...

V/Hens this was a decent one but hens came wit more quotables and fresher punchs wit a couple of good personals...

Ughhh. you callin me kid? you gotta be dumb dude.
The imposters of my imposters imposters could probably son you.
See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get.
Listen you fagot, i don't like gunplay but this is too drastic.
Once i balance the beam on your head it'll make you flip like gymnastics.

VS.

NOTHING.


I've pretty much gotta say the same as everyone else. If this was an audio battle John would've lost. But in text it ain't about an ill flow and multies.. it is about dissing your opponent and Wicked did not do that at all. Only his last bar may be considered to some as a diss, but still it was a weak played one. Hensley in my opinion didn't come strong in this and only had those 3 bars that I liked, all the rest was merely average... I don't think he even tried in this battle. The nameplay was decent, the imposter line made me laugh... but that gymnastics line I thought was ill.

V/ - John Hensley

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See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get
Listen you fagot, i don't like gunplay but this is too drastic.
Once i balance the beam on your head it'll make you flip like gymnastics.

vs.

Yo, i've never been hated on so much, its like a love crush...
This kid finally made it out closet just to hang on my nuts...

Pretty weak battle...Hens I'm not making any comment because I've seen you come harder than this...Wicked One you didn't come at all in my opinion...just a dully written verse.

Nothing more to say...

Vote - J. Hens

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See, history repeats itself, and i know you're upset.
But Wicked, One.... is actually just one more vote than you'll get.
I'm dissin' this cats shit...<-- and trust that my flows above it.
Now you're in need of safety.. like a corner that's blown his coverage.

v.s

nothing really

Hensely killed this shit. wick ain't stand a chance.

v/Hens

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