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04-30-03, 04:16 PM | #1 | |||
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13] SKapone vs [20] CrookEd
IP: E3CE 67F4
Check In By.... Friday
Post By.... Sunday Vote By....Tuesday Topic Born to Die
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Kevin. Alex. Patrick. John. |
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05-01-03, 10:24 AM | #2 | |||||||
BANNED - Pink Slipped
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check
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05-03-03, 01:23 AM | #3 | |||||||
BANNED - Pink Slipped
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its saturday my time,
do i take a win, or just move on? |
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05-04-03, 09:39 PM | #4 | ||||||
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Check ins can goto hell
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05-04-03, 09:41 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
I will be posting so you better post
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05-04-03, 10:38 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
Ight Im bettin this kid is No Showin
And this is an Ill topic So Im disappointed in myself for not havin anything really ready.. so heres my shit.. Yo- Life as I live it will be filled with tough times and pains Sure we're all born free but its garunteed we die in chains A death in vain may be the sweetest sorrow on earths surface Except to the souls that realize all along they've served a purpose If I was worthless why would people love and care for me Lay in a Hospital and stay from Vistiting hours Nine to Three Used to be a religious man, was faithful to the one above But the belief stopped as I felt decieved by the God I once loved The Mutha Fucka Cheated me! I wasnt ready to perish I had a family and kids with goals every moment I cherished Soon to be burried all because some Kid was Drunk and driving Watching Doctors Facial expressions told me theres no Surviving Despised my remaining days but then a boy was rolled beside my bed So sweet and Innocent he looked whith his eyes closed, I said "Nurse Betty? Can you tell me why this boy is in this place?" "His Heart skips a beat, We can transplant but we think its to late" I knew my fate, The Lord had showed me the way I was to leave Not in Disgrace but to exhale my breath to let another life breathe A sight to see as the Light filled my eyes, not giving up but letting go To eternally rest in peace and wait for my wife to come to better home The beep was loud, Medics rushed in to see my face with a smile And A note with the words "PLEASE READ SOON" as its title They read it aloud- Im proud to say that this is the only wish that I have To donate my heart to the little boy who needs it more than bad And I ask all, if I ever said my life was a waste , It was a Lie In this time God made me realize that I was born to die eD Give me any comments if you would plz, I dont think he will show.. Peace |
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05-04-03, 10:57 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 37BA 1E96
thats not right, what ever
Secretley its a well know fact [oxymoron intended] See-to-me this holes gettin too black Free-to-be every-thing i need-for-me Sea-to-sea peeps be informing me That i-cant-see past-the-fact, that-im-wack But that doesnt matter, i shouldent try Like genocide, suicide just seems so right Tie the rope off and prepare, no fight Speed shit up, cuz we born to die Always strain to get your recognition No matter if you wack, quit ur bitchin Get back to the pad and pen, write with presision Dreams and hope go together with dazzling fission Everybody is united under one thing The fact that they wanna rap, its their dream While my mind scheme keeps me feined I have to deal with it, its my reality Even when your thoughts are corupt and undignified You must stay strong, cuz you are born to die Even when facin devestation by player hation Always stay lacin ur ryhmes with determination This demonstration against me is steadily tracin My veins with death corrosin like 3rd world nations But i remain strong, with lyrics i stay elevatin All the time my dreams and hopes are separatin Stay young and true to yourself with every try I've said it enough, you know why, Your Born To Die |
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05-05-03, 02:12 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 4303 A5A7
you got a way with yo words it's almost absurd you stomped him to tha curb
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05-05-03, 02:17 AM | #9 | |||||||
BANNED - Pink Slipped
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IP: 7053 0ABB
i advertised the battle in chat, so i dunno who he was talkin about^^^^^
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05-05-03, 02:23 AM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 3801 E5AF
Both was nice betta then i could eva do, but s.f.c. had and even flow
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05-05-03, 02:37 AM | #11 | |||||||
. Doper Than You.
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IP: 5153 3B92
^LMAO, Was That A Vote??? Anyways......Vote-Crook-Ed
Reasons: Wordplay- Crook Complex- Crook Multi's-Other Guy, But They Weren't Dope..... Overall- Crook..... Nurse Betty? Can you tell me why this boy is in this place?" "His Heart skips a beat, We can transplant but we think its to late" I knew my fate, The Lord had showed me the way I was to leave Not in Disgrace but to exhale my breath to let another life breathe A sight to see as the Light filled my eyes, not giving up but letting go To eternally rest in peace and wait for my wife to come to better home The beep was loud, Medics rushed in to see my face with a smile And A note with the words "PLEASE READ SOON" as its title They read it aloud- Im proud to say that this is the only wish that I have To donate my heart to the little boy who needs it more than bad And I ask all, if I ever said my life was a waste , It was a Lie In this time God made me realize that I was born to die ^Those Were My Fav. Lines.....That Shit Was Deep Man......Good Ass Verse... So My Vote Stands Crook-Ed -OuT- |
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05-05-03, 05:10 AM | #12 | |||||||
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other guy?
< heres the name man |
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05-05-03, 09:02 AM | #13 | ||||||
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my vote is fro CrookEd... i j ust felt his verse more, made me kinda feel sorry for the person it was about... SFK's didn't do that
vt= CrookEd |
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05-05-03, 12:48 PM | #14 | ||||||
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upn
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05-05-03, 01:50 PM | #15 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 71E0 21F0
vote=CrookEd there was a better story and mechanics to his verse
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